PaulKipIII

Hey guys!
          	
          	Due to some major writer's block and a ton of personal matters, I have been unable to write a new chapter for my "Legend of Cowboy Thursday" story. But don't worry, I've been on the train again, and another chapter will come very soon.
          	
          	But on the side note, what is your thoughts on Heather Ponds? Do you think she should end up with Owen, or Kris? Just a thought.

PaulKipIII

Wow, that actually sounds pretty cool. I totally pictured Heather with the "Indian" and got spooked a little lol.
          	  But yeah, thanks for the input, but all I can say is...
          	  
          	  I ship Kris and Heather as well.
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PaulKipIII

Hey guys!
          
          Due to some major writer's block and a ton of personal matters, I have been unable to write a new chapter for my "Legend of Cowboy Thursday" story. But don't worry, I've been on the train again, and another chapter will come very soon.
          
          But on the side note, what is your thoughts on Heather Ponds? Do you think she should end up with Owen, or Kris? Just a thought.

PaulKipIII

Wow, that actually sounds pretty cool. I totally pictured Heather with the "Indian" and got spooked a little lol.
            But yeah, thanks for the input, but all I can say is...
            
            I ship Kris and Heather as well.
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MissYanxiet

Hi! I wanted to read your story “The Legend of Cowboy Thursday” for the Book club but when I clicked on the page, it said it was no longer available.

PaulKipIII

@MissYanxiet Hi, I'm want to try to make sure you get my messages since on my end, the messages just disappear and that never happened to me before. So don't be weirded out if your just suddenly bombared with random messages lol.
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PaulKipIII

@MissYanxiet Alright, I checked it and it seems good on my end. Probably just a glitch or something, but if it's still unavailable, maybe I'll try to do something. Other then that, I hope you enjoy!
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PaulKipIII

@MissYanxiet Huh, I'll check that out. Thank you for letting me know!
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teenagexxxsavage

Can you also check out my story my Green-eyed Jerk. I need critiques too both good and bad and from your story, you English is really good and your writing pattern is amazing.
          If you vote and comment, it'll mean a lot
          Thanks, have a great day/night.

teenagexxxsavage

@PaulKipIII I understand, and I hope you've taken care of your issues. Also thanks
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PaulKipIII

@teenagexxxsavage Also, good luck on your contest! (Also, sorry for the delay, so much stuff has been happening in my life I had to take care of some personal matters).
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PaulKipIII

@teenagexxxsavage Alright, I checked out the first chapter (or prologue), and what I can say is that it is a very good read. You have a gift of really controlling the scene and painting a picture which is key to storytelling. Despite a few grammatical errors here and there, they weren't too distracting from the story, which is alright. I left some pointers on what to fix. Other then that, very good job!
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PaulKipIII

Hey guys!
          
          I'm having some technical glitches on my end, but I uploaded another story and update to my Teen Fiction Club. If that isn't there, that is the glitch.  If you can't see the update, I was thinking about having you either comment in the Teen Fiction Community Topic or PM me on your favorite story from the club and why it is your favorite.
          With this, I will take a snippet of your review and give a shoutout to you and the story you like. Not only will this be a good chance for recognition, but overall you might develop a new friendship with the author if you haven't already.
          
          If you can see the update, disregard the entire message.