PaulStephenson3

'Let There Be Light' will now no longer be shown here. I've been working on it a lot lately and by having it here I run the risk of rejection by other publishers . . . not that a great deal of rejection isn't likely anyway, but that;s just one hurdle out of the way.

katycage

This is going to seem like a very snobbish message, but I just wanna save you from some embarrassment. No hard feelings. Lol... In your bio (the concept of which, I love, by the way), the repeating 'a' is actually assonance, not alliteration. Alliteration is repeating consonant sounds, whereas 'a' is a vowel. Just thought I'd let you know. The bright side is that replacing 'alliteration' with 'assonance' would still work! :D

PaulStephenson3

@katycage, It's on the edge but it works . . . :)
• Reply

PaulStephenson3

@katycage, alliteration
            
            Alliteration: 
            
            (noun)
            
            The occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words.
• Reply

PaulStephenson3

'Let There Be Light' will now no longer be shown here. I've been working on it a lot lately and by having it here I run the risk of rejection by other publishers . . . not that a great deal of rejection isn't likely anyway, but that;s just one hurdle out of the way.