NewBeta

Hi, I'm the girl who was being your beta. It's okay if not but I was wondering, if you like -and it was good- my feedback, could you post about me? I'm doing a few free reads to get experience but I'm hoping to become a paid beta one day? Did you like my feedback? What about the comments? My timing?

NewBeta

@PaytenHolliman hey it happens just checking in you are my favorite author now
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PaytenHolliman

@NewBeta Life's been a bit hectic recently so I hadn't got to write much, but the ideas for this book are endless, so I can't wait to continue writing!
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NewBeta

@PaytenHolliman How's the writing going?
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maka_zan

Hi, I came across your post on facebok about needing a beta reader and i de cided to rech out through this platform. What areas do you need feedback on?

PaytenHolliman

@maka_zan Honestly, a little bit of everything! I'm mostly looking to make sure the story is flowing well and that I'm headed in the right direction before I keep writing. I'd love feedback on the pacing, characters, dialogue, world-building, if anything is confusing, or if there are parts that feel slow or boring. If something isn't working, I definitely want to know so I can improve it!
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abdullateefjeje

Hi, I came across your post on Facebook. So here I am.
          I've read the summary of Bound To Midnight, I'm interested in reading and providing feedback. I'm just curious though, are you planning to eventually published to platform like KDP?

abdullateefjeje

@PaytenHolliman Alright then
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PaytenHolliman

@abdullateefjeje Hi! I'm so glad you made it here! Yes, I do plan to publish it on KDP once it's finished. Right now I'm looking for feedback to help me improve the story and make sure everything is heading in the right direction before I publish. Thank you so much for offering to read it—I really appreciate it!
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