Marvy_Ola
Hi,I apologize for messaging you without your consent but could you please give a try to read my story?
KenieWenie
hello po! f2f and v2v?
NewBeta
Hi, I'm the girl who was being your beta. It's okay if not but I was wondering, if you like -and it was good- my feedback, could you post about me? I'm doing a few free reads to get experience but I'm hoping to become a paid beta one day? Did you like my feedback? What about the comments? My timing?
PaytenHolliman
@NewBeta Hey! Just wanted to let you know, a few edits have been made (Mainly the 20's chapters). I wanted Sidian to feel a bit meaner so I cleaned his chapters up. With that being said, a new chapter is out feel free to read when you have a chance!
NewBeta
@PaytenHolliman Yes!!! You are amazing. Keep going sister and you'll start making something. You are gonna be big cheese one day!
PaytenHolliman
@NewBeta New chapter posted! And following chapters are in the making!
maka_zan
Hi, I came across your post on facebok about needing a beta reader and i de cided to rech out through this platform. What areas do you need feedback on?
PaytenHolliman
@maka_zan Honestly, a little bit of everything! I'm mostly looking to make sure the story is flowing well and that I'm headed in the right direction before I keep writing. I'd love feedback on the pacing, characters, dialogue, world-building, if anything is confusing, or if there are parts that feel slow or boring. If something isn't working, I definitely want to know so I can improve it!
abdullateefjeje
Hi, I came across your post on Facebook. So here I am.
I've read the summary of Bound To Midnight, I'm interested in reading and providing feedback. I'm just curious though, are you planning to eventually published to platform like KDP?
abdullateefjeje
@PaytenHolliman Alright then
PaytenHolliman
@abdullateefjeje Hi! I'm so glad you made it here! Yes, I do plan to publish it on KDP once it's finished. Right now I'm looking for feedback to help me improve the story and make sure everything is heading in the right direction before I publish. Thank you so much for offering to read it—I really appreciate it!