PeaLee13

Hey so I think I've given up on Following the Moon. I've finished the first book and started the second (it was going to be a trilogy) but I don't like the writing and the characters don't have much personality and the plot has a ton of holes. I want to write something in proud of and this isn't it. I'm kinda reluctant to stop, only because of the time I've spent on it (a little over a year) but I think it's time to move on to MY NEXT BOOK which I may or may not post. Thank you all for reading!

zodistars

Hey there Piper it was nice in New York City
          You're a thousand miles away but woah it was so pretty

zodistars

You could have shortened that to "I'll be there soon" and it would have worked better
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PeaLee13

I will be going there soon you know it's true
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