Peaceback

sup guys, peaceback here, just want to tell you that, sadly, son of the goddesses will be rewrite along with naruto the two blood the lightning thief and love of a killer, as for son of the goddesses, as i already explain in sunflower story, i feel like the story has no direction at all, i focus too much making naruto bad-ass, explosion and greek, i forgot the fact that naruto was neglected by his parent, that was one of the main point of the story, i didn't pay attention to minato and kushina as they clearly stated their want to mend their relationship back with their son and yet, i didn't put much detail on how they gonna do that, so that about it, as for nttb the lightning thief and love of a killer, no, just no, in my defense nttb was my first story i ever made and love of a killer is the second of it,  the story missing many detail, so yeah, ciao

Trolltyrant21

Hello may I suggest sticking with 2 novels at a time max 3 I just found your shinobi reincarnated novel it’s interesting I’ve not even read the whole chap but so far it looks good just wanted to make shure your not one of the authors on here that streach themselves out to far 
          	  
          	  Also a novel idea is the god of blade works and liquids
          	  
          	  Basically mix Percy Jackson with fate stay night
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Trolltyrant21

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For your Percy jackson naruto fanfic where he is narutos riencarnation  are they merged slowly or is it split personality disorder stick 
          
          I don’t like that I also hate multiple mcs like that bullshit hurts to read I only want one POV sometimes it’s ok but that’s rare and in a particular situation