@Spiritwolfy4
Hello! I'm technically DeltaDaisy's co-author/editor/test audience for her fanfic, "Sincere Affection". We actually work together on most, if not all, our projects.
She sent me your fanfic to read, so I did. And it's pretty good! The kind of fanfic yours is, where the reader gets thrown into the world of their favorite anime/video game/etc., tend to be some of the most enjoyable ones I read.