@Pear_on_pizza
Okay, so Idk if anyone actually cares but I feel like I'm doing a bad job writing if I don't point this out. There are small inconsistencies between perspectives, both in dialogue, tone and small, random details. This is (usually) on purpose to present a more unreliable narrator.
Considering changing "White Balloons" to "It started with seven". White balloons doesn't make sense now that the story has changed. Let me know.
Nothing makes a person feel more powerful than editing Wikipedia.
Didn't proofread this chapter (Kyara 18) so don't flame me lol. I know it seems like I never do, but I promise I try a little bit.
Distopian
Alright so, after like a month I finally got another chapter out. It's just a huge (1000+ word) exposition dump but I was wondering if everyone wanted some more filler or if we should just get to the first death?
Throwback to the time my sister got one of those "Send this text to fifteen people and the following will happen" texts from a friend, so she sent it to everyone in our family.
I just learned that 'Gillette Blade' is a1950's slang word for a bisexual woman, and I think it's time for a bio change.
Person A: "I am going to burn in hell for this. If the Christians are right, and I am wrong, then I will burn in hell, I can already feel the heat"
Person B: "Even if the Christians are wrong, at some point on earth, someone is going to light you on fire."
Happy Pride month all my Gays, Lesbians, Bis, Transgenders, Questioning (Or queer, I've been told both, please inform me) Pans, Aces and every plus out there. I wish you a very awkward "Happy Pride month, uh, you must like this month" from your straight friends
@aster-alpine Because I wasn't joking when I said you are literally all I read