Daily appreciation lol but srsly thank u for ur time. U checking out the story from a more critical pov means a lot and I promise I'll get to ur story too!!
Now, I love your comments but I bet it's more time consuming to check every little thing esp cuz the story is still a first draft (meaning that once it's complete I'll go over it and fix the most obv mistakes such as grammar, etc ) so I don't need much correction for those BC TRUST ME I SEE IT, but rather like the over all personal thoughts on the chaps, NOW OFC DO THIS YOUR WAY, DON'T MEAN TO DIRECT HOW U JUDGE MY STORY But ykwim.
I just feel like I take the most use of ur comments when u give me more ideas and reviews on how to improve my overall writing style and keep readers more captivated like u do in the ends of the chaps, give me tips when u see a lot of repeating, etc. iykwim?
But please don't change your honesty.
Ps. The plot is a bit more complex than her leaving everything behind and lives happily ever after. I don't wanna spoil anything cuz wth but lets just say they'll all eventually meet the ghosts of their pasts so there will be no loop holes
