Um, can please update your book? I love your writing style and description, but, just some constructive criticism, you don’t have to read this, is, I think that zampukato is spelled zanpakuto.
Hi! Sorry to bother you, (๑→‿←๑) but I'm trying to get feedback for my book "What you won't do for love"~ I'd really appreciate it if you took some time out of your day to read some of it, to your liking of course! Thank yuu
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