PedroLSantiago

Hey everyone!
          	
          	After the unexpected response to The Mess We Made, I decided to take a bit of a break to improve my writing and learn more as a writer.
          	
          	Right now, I’m working on my next story, and I honestly think it might be my favorite project I’ve ever worked on. I’m taking my time with it, so I don’t have a release date yet; but I promise I’m putting a lot of care into it, and it’ll be worth the wait.
          	
          	Also, I just want to thank everyone who’s been commenting on my stories, whether it’s positive feedback or criticism. I truly appreciate all of it. It helps me grow and get better, and I don’t take it for granted.
          	
          	Thanks for being patient with me, and I hope you guys like what I'm cooking up! 

vanillarose_stories

The Mess We Made is amazing, I actually can't wait to read all of it, I hope the responses weren't negative!! Xx
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vanillarose_stories

@PedroLSantiago Oh my God! What happened?? I've JUST started reading this book and I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT, please don't delete it or anything?!?! 
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YoursOnyx

@PedroLSantiago First things first, WELCOME BACK!
          	  I'm so thrilled to hear that you're working on something new and I'm very much looking forward to it. Reading TMWM was what led me to start posting on Wattpad and I definitely owe that to you x3 goodluckk with your next story, I'm sure it'll bring in a lot of positive reviews. Excited to see your cooking :p
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PedroLSantiago

Hey everyone!
          
          After the unexpected response to The Mess We Made, I decided to take a bit of a break to improve my writing and learn more as a writer.
          
          Right now, I’m working on my next story, and I honestly think it might be my favorite project I’ve ever worked on. I’m taking my time with it, so I don’t have a release date yet; but I promise I’m putting a lot of care into it, and it’ll be worth the wait.
          
          Also, I just want to thank everyone who’s been commenting on my stories, whether it’s positive feedback or criticism. I truly appreciate all of it. It helps me grow and get better, and I don’t take it for granted.
          
          Thanks for being patient with me, and I hope you guys like what I'm cooking up! 

vanillarose_stories

The Mess We Made is amazing, I actually can't wait to read all of it, I hope the responses weren't negative!! Xx
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vanillarose_stories

@PedroLSantiago Oh my God! What happened?? I've JUST started reading this book and I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT, please don't delete it or anything?!?! 
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YoursOnyx

@PedroLSantiago First things first, WELCOME BACK!
            I'm so thrilled to hear that you're working on something new and I'm very much looking forward to it. Reading TMWM was what led me to start posting on Wattpad and I definitely owe that to you x3 goodluckk with your next story, I'm sure it'll bring in a lot of positive reviews. Excited to see your cooking :p
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VivianOrji6

'The mess we made" 
          
          Hmm aren't going to lie was not well detailed, but still capturing to read untill it wasn't. I didn't finish the book because like every other novel, it was a cliche in my opinion, and mundane.
           
            When there is a misunderstanding and an accident uniting the characters together seems so easy to do for you writers, instead of the cheat having to crave and fight harder for Mason love and affection. Nothing about live being patient , understanding e t.c expected more seeing how Mason was in his life too.
           
           Just an example of being misunderstood, hurt and jumping to the next available interested partner that said best friend of his. Try to make it real!! 
          
          My passionate dislike for Mason SUPPOSED best friend who turned to the next available man for attention or distraction. THIS shits happen in real life because you tell stories that make it look like there won't be consequences. 
          
          And it isn't even sweet enough for me to call it a 'fantasy' or a friction
          
          I just feel there should be more consequences, not just an immediate unity to cheats. 
           
          We hope to escape harsh reality by reading your books, not be trapped in another unjustifiable friction
          If you get what I mean
          
          Anyway it was a good piece, could have been better, expected more. But it is what it is.
          
          Left me very unsatisfied.
          
          Write more, do better!

VivianOrji6

@Priloshnee00  	I do support writers, but I also believe honest reviews are part of that. I’m comfortable with how I express my opinions, and I’d prefer to keep my other account private.
            
            
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Priloshnee00

@VivianOrji6, you're right. It's not my place to teach you, so I won't.
            As for not being a writer, if you stand by your work, what's your other account? Maybe I've read your work, maybe not.
            As you said, opinion, and my opinion is simply that as writers we need to encourage each other. Always. "Write more, do better" is not encouraging, it could have been.
            Thank you for responding. 
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VivianOrji6

Don’t do that, you have your opinion like I have mine. Don’t teach me how to express mine, we can’t all be “nice” as you stated. 
            
            If airing my views and giving my critics as polite as I can be ,made an un nice person to you then that’s  fine, I wasn’t looking to impress anyone. Just to air my view. You don’t get to teach me how to communicate, No rights to do that. 
             And this thing about being sentimental every time creates more harm, than good be objective than sentimental,  I complimented and I criticized my views, both were  clearly stated. 
            And yes I have written novels 2 very complete ones and have gotten feedbacks negative and positive,  in this same app with another account, and i appreciate it when am given more detailed errors and compliments  in my work, rather than sentimental half baked compliments.
            So your wrong to assume am not a writer. In fact you’re wrong in everything!!!
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PedroLSantiago

I want to take a moment to thank everyone who has shown support for and enjoyed my story, "The Mess We Made." I’ve never had a written work appreciated by so many people before, and it just hit 8K reads! That’s incredible!
          
          I’m currently working on a new story that includes romance, suspense, drama, and sadness. It's a story that will keep you on the edge of your seat…

Watashii_Yuri_Desu

@PedroLSantiago Now it's 34k ! Congratulations !! <33
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freyakwrites

Truly a beautiful book. Congrats  
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PedroLSantiago

Hi everyone! Today I posted ‘Embers Between Us’ a gay romance short story. It’s only 5 chapters long but I hope you guys enjoy it!
          
          I just wanted to write a little something while I still plan out my next big project.
          
          I also wanted to give a quick thanks to everyone who has supported my first project ‘The Mess We Made’ currently it’s at 4K reads and that’s sooo exciting! Can’t wait for you guys to see what’s next!

PedroLSantiago

Update**
          
          Hi readers! First, I want to thank you for the incredible support you've shown recently; it truly means a lot to me. Now for the update: The Mess We Made is currently undergoing editing. I'm not sure how long it will take, but I'm hopeful to be finished by the end of this month. As of now, chapters 1 and 2 have been edited and updated.
          
          Additionally, The Mess We Made has a brand new cover! I love how it turned out, and I hope you do too!

PedroLSantiago

Hi everyone, earlier today I updated all previous chapters of ‘The Mess We Made’ to a new version. I was told my paragraph structure was a bit messy, so I went back and fixed that. I also slightly fixed some dialogue and added some details where I thought they made sense.
          
          I hope you enjoy the changes, thank you for reading!