'The mess we made"
Hmm aren't going to lie was not well detailed, but still capturing to read untill it wasn't. I didn't finish the book because like every other novel, it was a cliche in my opinion, and mundane.
When there is a misunderstanding and an accident uniting the characters together seems so easy to do for you writers, instead of the cheat having to crave and fight harder for Mason love and affection. Nothing about live being patient , understanding e t.c expected more seeing how Mason was in his life too.
Just an example of being misunderstood, hurt and jumping to the next available interested partner that said best friend of his. Try to make it real!!
My passionate dislike for Mason SUPPOSED best friend who turned to the next available man for attention or distraction. THIS shits happen in real life because you tell stories that make it look like there won't be consequences.
And it isn't even sweet enough for me to call it a 'fantasy' or a friction
I just feel there should be more consequences, not just an immediate unity to cheats.
We hope to escape harsh reality by reading your books, not be trapped in another unjustifiable friction
If you get what I mean
Anyway it was a good piece, could have been better, expected more. But it is what it is.
Left me very unsatisfied.
Write more, do better!
