Pelach

Alright, I’m going to need some feedback on my latest chapter. It’s been three months since I last wrote one and I don’t know if the quality standard is still up which I want to keep quite high.
          	
          	So is the chapter any good? I ask here because nobody is able to give me criticism on the book itself.
          	
          	Are the action scenes still serviceable? The scenarios still mildly interesting? You still care about the characters? Too many bad references like the league of legends ones in my lates chapter?
          	
          	Some advise is always welcome because comments are the best thing about creating. Seeing all of you interact with my stuff almost makes the suffering worth it.
          	
          	(I won’t accept the advise „publish more chapters“)
          	
          	So give me some of your thoughts, please.
          	
          	Thanks.

Zzzzzzzzzzzzz26

@Pelach It's real good, that's all I have to say.
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Pelach

@GhostShadow421 either I’m taking hardcore LSD or they did in the last chapters. Well anyway if not then it still goes down to Quartz who is good friends with the N51 squad and helps them out. So yeah. He’s helping them get Hank for this but it went south because…
          	  
          	  THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
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GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  A little bit of confusion in terms of KCCO they don't co-operate with each other 
          	  
          	  But overall it's a good chapter as always I'm glad to see it.
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Official_GCD

@Pelach I'm probably just Bugging and Annoying you at the same time but this is my Last Question....Since the N51 are kinda Neutral..What do you think the A.A.H.W and the Nexus Core would be on Each Faction's Side in GIrls Frontline?..I like to think that the Nexus Core would be Chill including the A.A.H.W with the G&K If Hank Was never there in the first place and the N51 would stll Hostile to the A.A.H.W and the Nexus Core like their Behaviour in MADNESS:Project Nexus 2 (Bonus Question) Have you seen Madness Combat 12?...What was your Reaction after watching it?

Pelach

I think in the lore N51 and AAHW are allies. Other than that Nexus might be hostile to everyone since they’d basically just be another PMC and my reaction to MC 12 is nothing special. At that point I kinda lost interest in the fandom and so on, so I thought it was fine. And if Hank‘s not in the GFL universe then AAHW is unemployed and will just leave since that’s their whole purpose.
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Official_GCD

I didn't expect for Hank to not have Plot Armor cuz Normally He has Plot Armor but in this Case?.......I was really Surprised that he didn't and Died @Pelach Overall Really looking forward to Continue Eh?

Official_GCD

@Pelach But also did you see Madness Combat 12? That was Really Good..... 10/10
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Pelach

Well stories are quite boring if you know it will all go splendid. And I like it when you are reminded that your favorite characters are just mortals who can die like anyone else cause that raises stakes. And I think I wrapped up his end well. As for continuation, well that’s sort of cancelled. Lost my spark for writing. So maybe this is a long hiatus or maybe a permanent. Glad you enjoyed the story though.
            
            What you could do is drop a follow though. Maybe just maybe that will give me motivation to continue lmao.
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Official_GCD

Hank in Girls Frontline?....That's the kind of story i need.......Madness and Girls Frontline my Favourite Series.......Good Story tho mate............. @Pelach

Official_GCD

@Pelach And I have a Something to say Mr.Pelach......when i was watching YT i saw a Video Called "Why Femboys are better than Women" I don't even know why that was there XO Anyways..Hope you have a good day........And Remember Stay Hydrated
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Pelach

Thank you. I probably won’t do more. We will see.
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Pelach

Alright, I’m going to need some feedback on my latest chapter. It’s been three months since I last wrote one and I don’t know if the quality standard is still up which I want to keep quite high.
          
          So is the chapter any good? I ask here because nobody is able to give me criticism on the book itself.
          
          Are the action scenes still serviceable? The scenarios still mildly interesting? You still care about the characters? Too many bad references like the league of legends ones in my lates chapter?
          
          Some advise is always welcome because comments are the best thing about creating. Seeing all of you interact with my stuff almost makes the suffering worth it.
          
          (I won’t accept the advise „publish more chapters“)
          
          So give me some of your thoughts, please.
          
          Thanks.

Zzzzzzzzzzzzz26

@Pelach It's real good, that's all I have to say.
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Pelach

@GhostShadow421 either I’m taking hardcore LSD or they did in the last chapters. Well anyway if not then it still goes down to Quartz who is good friends with the N51 squad and helps them out. So yeah. He’s helping them get Hank for this but it went south because…
            
            THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
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GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  A little bit of confusion in terms of KCCO they don't co-operate with each other 
            
            But overall it's a good chapter as always I'm glad to see it.
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bubs_leverage

hey there, mate! dunno if you’ve seen some of the new GFL events (more importantly Cartesian Theatre), but i’ve got news for you!
          
          quite literally any gfl fanfic can be canon, since Cartesian Theatre confirms the existence of alternate timelines! think of that, Hank J(Motherfucker) Wimbleton actually possibly being canon in GFL’s story? then again, krinkels liked the tricky mod for fnf enough to make it canon, so what’s not stopping him from making this canon as well? (it’d be funny, i’ll say)

Pelach

Yeah it would be really funny if my version of Hank suddenly became canon. Sadly I’m basically out of those two communities since I guess my interest just isn’t there anymore for both of them. GFL especially. My book isn’t canceled though, will just take more time.
            
            But sadly I don’t think my Hank book is well known enough because it’s Wattpad lol. Nobody who is sane uses Wattpad. And I’d be embarrassed if Krinkels found it because quality wise… I don’t think it’s enough. This was my first book after all.
            
            Thanks for reaching out though. Take care, mate.
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GhostShadow421

Hey, how are you doing?
          
          You know GFL 2 is out.
          
          But don't be discouraged, your work is really good. At least I like it and that's cool. 
          I'm looking forward to the continuation of SOF.

GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  I hope this trait of laziness ends soon.
            
            And you'll have some free time
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Pelach

Soon, maybe? I‘m lazy and kinda busy.
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MeteorDraco

Hello, i just wanna say that GFL2 is out !

GhostShadow421

@ MeteorDraco  :(
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Scarzero33

@ Pelach  yea yea this really sad
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