Pelach

Alright, I’m going to need some feedback on my latest chapter. It’s been three months since I last wrote one and I don’t know if the quality standard is still up which I want to keep quite high.
          	
          	So is the chapter any good? I ask here because nobody is able to give me criticism on the book itself.
          	
          	Are the action scenes still serviceable? The scenarios still mildly interesting? You still care about the characters? Too many bad references like the league of legends ones in my lates chapter?
          	
          	Some advise is always welcome because comments are the best thing about creating. Seeing all of you interact with my stuff almost makes the suffering worth it.
          	
          	(I won’t accept the advise „publish more chapters“)
          	
          	So give me some of your thoughts, please.
          	
          	Thanks.

Zzzzzzzzzzzzz26

@Pelach It's real good, that's all I have to say.
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Pelach

@GhostShadow421 either I’m taking hardcore LSD or they did in the last chapters. Well anyway if not then it still goes down to Quartz who is good friends with the N51 squad and helps them out. So yeah. He’s helping them get Hank for this but it went south because…
          	  
          	  THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
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GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  A little bit of confusion in terms of KCCO they don't co-operate with each other 
          	  
          	  But overall it's a good chapter as always I'm glad to see it.
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Pelach

Alright, I’m going to need some feedback on my latest chapter. It’s been three months since I last wrote one and I don’t know if the quality standard is still up which I want to keep quite high.
          
          So is the chapter any good? I ask here because nobody is able to give me criticism on the book itself.
          
          Are the action scenes still serviceable? The scenarios still mildly interesting? You still care about the characters? Too many bad references like the league of legends ones in my lates chapter?
          
          Some advise is always welcome because comments are the best thing about creating. Seeing all of you interact with my stuff almost makes the suffering worth it.
          
          (I won’t accept the advise „publish more chapters“)
          
          So give me some of your thoughts, please.
          
          Thanks.

Zzzzzzzzzzzzz26

@Pelach It's real good, that's all I have to say.
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Pelach

@GhostShadow421 either I’m taking hardcore LSD or they did in the last chapters. Well anyway if not then it still goes down to Quartz who is good friends with the N51 squad and helps them out. So yeah. He’s helping them get Hank for this but it went south because…
            
            THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
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GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  A little bit of confusion in terms of KCCO they don't co-operate with each other 
            
            But overall it's a good chapter as always I'm glad to see it.
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bubs_leverage

hey there, mate! dunno if you’ve seen some of the new GFL events (more importantly Cartesian Theatre), but i’ve got news for you!
          
          quite literally any gfl fanfic can be canon, since Cartesian Theatre confirms the existence of alternate timelines! think of that, Hank J(Motherfucker) Wimbleton actually possibly being canon in GFL’s story? then again, krinkels liked the tricky mod for fnf enough to make it canon, so what’s not stopping him from making this canon as well? (it’d be funny, i’ll say)

Pelach

Yeah it would be really funny if my version of Hank suddenly became canon. Sadly I’m basically out of those two communities since I guess my interest just isn’t there anymore for both of them. GFL especially. My book isn’t canceled though, will just take more time.
            
            But sadly I don’t think my Hank book is well known enough because it’s Wattpad lol. Nobody who is sane uses Wattpad. And I’d be embarrassed if Krinkels found it because quality wise… I don’t think it’s enough. This was my first book after all.
            
            Thanks for reaching out though. Take care, mate.
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GhostShadow421

Hey, how are you doing?
          
          You know GFL 2 is out.
          
          But don't be discouraged, your work is really good. At least I like it and that's cool. 
          I'm looking forward to the continuation of SOF.

GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  I hope this trait of laziness ends soon.
            
            And you'll have some free time
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Pelach

Soon, maybe? I‘m lazy and kinda busy.
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MeteorDraco

Hello, i just wanna say that GFL2 is out !

GhostShadow421

@ MeteorDraco  :(
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SoldierN51

@ Pelach  yea yea this really sad
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ChihabM

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Hi 
          I've just returned to see how things going with your writings, and I saw the massages that you left on your "Scared ace" and "Madness on the frontline" books and I have to say: The joke is on you, I've finished both books several months ago HAHAHA. 
          
          But in all seriousness, your stories were good in all honesty, even if you don't feel like they are the best piece of Shakespearean literatur out there, its much better than most (not all) of the shit on this app, and having people praising it definitely agree. 
          
          Being an author on the SCP Wiki. I know how it feels to hate writing something you can't wrap your head around its plot, but stop underestimating yourself, and keep looking for the wrongs with your work so you can improve yourself. 
          
          Waiting for that Azur Lane fanfic (YOU BETTER USE THE H-44 AS YOUR MC). Stay cool lad 

Pelach

Crazy man. I don’t really deserve this because ya know. I update once every leap year. I try my best but I’m constantly fighting with not wanting to write that stuff and kinda locked myself into those stories that I’m losing interest in. But I don’t want to go that route where I have 20 unfinished books. I know how annoying that is and I want to get this stuff over with. I think about my chapters a lot. What to include and what to reference in fights, like my last shadow over the frontline fight had huge inspirations. Which takes time, plus with my general attitude right now I just don’t feel like writing anymore. I still plan to and want to someday but I guess I’m too weak to pick up the pen.
            
            Additionally I play League a lot now so I want to end myself which makes my depressions even worse and makes it that I want to waste my time writing even less. Gotta use it on League after all.
            
            SCP is some cool stuff. You being an SCP wiki writer is admirable. Love the franchise too. There shall be chaos, my friend.
            
            Now to the Azur Lane fic. I have severe brain damage because of GFL. Another gacha game I’ll have to research and maybe even play will accelerate my journey to game end myself even faster. So maybe. But I already though about doing a League story next so probably in the next century.
            
            Appreciate you, pal. Messages and people like you is what keeps this account alive. Also English is not my first language. Help.
            \[T]/
            
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GhostShadow421

Hi first time reading something on wattpad. 
          
          I really enjoyed your book Shadow over the frontline. 
          I'm looking forward to the sequel. I hope to see the sequel soon. 
          
          I also liked the DLC for your book although the English is a bit bad but I think it's still not bad
          :)
          
          

Pelach

Well the „DLC“ is not written by me and some Russian guy hit me up who wanted to write it. Thought that was cool so I let him. And most stuff on Wattpad is pretty bad so don’t stay too long or the brainrot will consume you. I’m not dead and I’ll work on the next chapter someday. When I have time. And want to. You still gotta wait for long, pal.
            
            Appreciate you though
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MeteorDraco

Hey man, you do well? I just wanna say hi

MeteorDraco

Sure, take your time,it is not like I want 1day/1book or smth like that,I just want to say hi
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Pelach

I am not doing well. Uni is kinda beating my ass. That kinda means I have little time for my Wattpad journey now. Know it is not abandoned or anything. I’ll write when I have time and I’m in the right mindset to write.
            
            I just need longer for my chapters now. So give me a bit more time, will ya?
            
            Thanks for asking, mate
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