Pelach
Alright, I’m going to need some feedback on my latest chapter. It’s been three months since I last wrote one and I don’t know if the quality standard is still up which I want to keep quite high. So is the chapter any good? I ask here because nobody is able to give me criticism on the book itself. Are the action scenes still serviceable? The scenarios still mildly interesting? You still care about the characters? Too many bad references like the league of legends ones in my lates chapter? Some advise is always welcome because comments are the best thing about creating. Seeing all of you interact with my stuff almost makes the suffering worth it. (I won’t accept the advise „publish more chapters“) So give me some of your thoughts, please. Thanks.
Pelach
@GhostShadow421 either I’m taking hardcore LSD or they did in the last chapters. Well anyway if not then it still goes down to Quartz who is good friends with the N51 squad and helps them out. So yeah. He’s helping them get Hank for this but it went south because… THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
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GhostShadow421
@ Pelach A little bit of confusion in terms of KCCO they don't co-operate with each other But overall it's a good chapter as always I'm glad to see it.
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