Pelach

Alright, I’m going to need some feedback on my latest chapter. It’s been three months since I last wrote one and I don’t know if the quality standard is still up which I want to keep quite high.
          	
          	So is the chapter any good? I ask here because nobody is able to give me criticism on the book itself.
          	
          	Are the action scenes still serviceable? The scenarios still mildly interesting? You still care about the characters? Too many bad references like the league of legends ones in my lates chapter?
          	
          	Some advise is always welcome because comments are the best thing about creating. Seeing all of you interact with my stuff almost makes the suffering worth it.
          	
          	(I won’t accept the advise „publish more chapters“)
          	
          	So give me some of your thoughts, please.
          	
          	Thanks.

Zzzzzzzzzzzzz26

@Pelach It's real good, that's all I have to say.
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Pelach

@GhostShadow421 either I’m taking hardcore LSD or they did in the last chapters. Well anyway if not then it still goes down to Quartz who is good friends with the N51 squad and helps them out. So yeah. He’s helping them get Hank for this but it went south because…
          	  
          	  THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
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GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  A little bit of confusion in terms of KCCO they don't co-operate with each other 
          	  
          	  But overall it's a good chapter as always I'm glad to see it.
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Director_McKnight92

@Pelach I'm probably just Bugging and Annoying you at the same time but this is my Last Question....Since the N51 are kinda Neutral..What do you think the A.A.H.W and the Nexus Core would be on Each Faction's Side in GIrls Frontline?..I like to think that the Nexus Core would be Chill including the A.A.H.W with the G&K If Hank Was never there in the first place and the N51 would stll Hostile to the A.A.H.W and the Nexus Core like their Behaviour in MADNESS:Project Nexus 2 (Bonus Question) Have you seen Madness Combat 12?...What was your Reaction after watching it?

Pelach

I think in the lore N51 and AAHW are allies. Other than that Nexus might be hostile to everyone since they’d basically just be another PMC and my reaction to MC 12 is nothing special. At that point I kinda lost interest in the fandom and so on, so I thought it was fine. And if Hank‘s not in the GFL universe then AAHW is unemployed and will just leave since that’s their whole purpose.
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Director_McKnight92

I didn't expect for Hank to not have Plot Armor cuz Normally He has Plot Armor but in this Case?.......I was really Surprised that he didn't and Died @Pelach Overall Really looking forward to Continue Eh?

Director_McKnight92

@Pelach But also did you see Madness Combat 12? That was Really Good..... 10/10
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Pelach

Well stories are quite boring if you know it will all go splendid. And I like it when you are reminded that your favorite characters are just mortals who can die like anyone else cause that raises stakes. And I think I wrapped up his end well. As for continuation, well that’s sort of cancelled. Lost my spark for writing. So maybe this is a long hiatus or maybe a permanent. Glad you enjoyed the story though.
            
            What you could do is drop a follow though. Maybe just maybe that will give me motivation to continue lmao.
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Director_McKnight92

Hank in Girls Frontline?....That's the kind of story i need.......Madness and Girls Frontline my Favourite Series.......Good Story tho mate............. @Pelach

Director_McKnight92

@Pelach And I have a Something to say Mr.Pelach......when i was watching YT i saw a Video Called "Why Femboys are better than Women" I don't even know why that was there XO Anyways..Hope you have a good day........And Remember Stay Hydrated
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Pelach

Thank you. I probably won’t do more. We will see.
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Jamestheinterested

Hey how are you doing today?

Jamestheinterested

@Pelach That's good to know
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Pelach

I am alive if you’re wondering.
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Pelach

Alright, I’m going to need some feedback on my latest chapter. It’s been three months since I last wrote one and I don’t know if the quality standard is still up which I want to keep quite high.
          
          So is the chapter any good? I ask here because nobody is able to give me criticism on the book itself.
          
          Are the action scenes still serviceable? The scenarios still mildly interesting? You still care about the characters? Too many bad references like the league of legends ones in my lates chapter?
          
          Some advise is always welcome because comments are the best thing about creating. Seeing all of you interact with my stuff almost makes the suffering worth it.
          
          (I won’t accept the advise „publish more chapters“)
          
          So give me some of your thoughts, please.
          
          Thanks.

Zzzzzzzzzzzzz26

@Pelach It's real good, that's all I have to say.
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Pelach

@GhostShadow421 either I’m taking hardcore LSD or they did in the last chapters. Well anyway if not then it still goes down to Quartz who is good friends with the N51 squad and helps them out. So yeah. He’s helping them get Hank for this but it went south because…
            
            THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
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GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  A little bit of confusion in terms of KCCO they don't co-operate with each other 
            
            But overall it's a good chapter as always I'm glad to see it.
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bubs_leverage

hey there, mate! dunno if you’ve seen some of the new GFL events (more importantly Cartesian Theatre), but i’ve got news for you!
          
          quite literally any gfl fanfic can be canon, since Cartesian Theatre confirms the existence of alternate timelines! think of that, Hank J(Motherfucker) Wimbleton actually possibly being canon in GFL’s story? then again, krinkels liked the tricky mod for fnf enough to make it canon, so what’s not stopping him from making this canon as well? (it’d be funny, i’ll say)

Pelach

Yeah it would be really funny if my version of Hank suddenly became canon. Sadly I’m basically out of those two communities since I guess my interest just isn’t there anymore for both of them. GFL especially. My book isn’t canceled though, will just take more time.
            
            But sadly I don’t think my Hank book is well known enough because it’s Wattpad lol. Nobody who is sane uses Wattpad. And I’d be embarrassed if Krinkels found it because quality wise… I don’t think it’s enough. This was my first book after all.
            
            Thanks for reaching out though. Take care, mate.
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MeteorDraco

Happy new year…pretty late, srry

Pelach

Frohes Neues, my friend
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GhostShadow421

Hey, how are you doing?
          
          You know GFL 2 is out.
          
          But don't be discouraged, your work is really good. At least I like it and that's cool. 
          I'm looking forward to the continuation of SOF.

Pelach

No
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GhostShadow421

@ Pelach  I hope this trait of laziness ends soon.
            
            And you'll have some free time
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Pelach

Soon, maybe? I‘m lazy and kinda busy.
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MeteorDraco

Hello, i just wanna say that GFL2 is out !

GhostShadow421

@ MeteorDraco  :(
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MeteorDraco

@Pelach :(
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Scarzero33

@ Pelach  yea yea this really sad
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ChihabM

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Hi 
          I've just returned to see how things going with your writings, and I saw the massages that you left on your "Scared ace" and "Madness on the frontline" books and I have to say: The joke is on you, I've finished both books several months ago HAHAHA. 
          
          But in all seriousness, your stories were good in all honesty, even if you don't feel like they are the best piece of Shakespearean literatur out there, its much better than most (not all) of the shit on this app, and having people praising it definitely agree. 
          
          Being an author on the SCP Wiki. I know how it feels to hate writing something you can't wrap your head around its plot, but stop underestimating yourself, and keep looking for the wrongs with your work so you can improve yourself. 
          
          Waiting for that Azur Lane fanfic (YOU BETTER USE THE H-44 AS YOUR MC). Stay cool lad

Pelach

Crazy man. I don’t really deserve this because ya know. I update once every leap year. I try my best but I’m constantly fighting with not wanting to write that stuff and kinda locked myself into those stories that I’m losing interest in. But I don’t want to go that route where I have 20 unfinished books. I know how annoying that is and I want to get this stuff over with. I think about my chapters a lot. What to include and what to reference in fights, like my last shadow over the frontline fight had huge inspirations. Which takes time, plus with my general attitude right now I just don’t feel like writing anymore. I still plan to and want to someday but I guess I’m too weak to pick up the pen.
            
            Additionally I play League a lot now so I want to end myself which makes my depressions even worse and makes it that I want to waste my time writing even less. Gotta use it on League after all.
            
            SCP is some cool stuff. You being an SCP wiki writer is admirable. Love the franchise too. There shall be chaos, my friend.
            
            Now to the Azur Lane fic. I have severe brain damage because of GFL. Another gacha game I’ll have to research and maybe even play will accelerate my journey to game end myself even faster. So maybe. But I already though about doing a League story next so probably in the next century.
            
            Appreciate you, pal. Messages and people like you is what keeps this account alive. Also English is not my first language. Help.
            \[T]/
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