Penance11

I’m having trouble writing chapter 10, all ideas are accepted for this chapter and any future chapters with my story. I’ll also help with any story y’all are writing up if y’all permit it.

spiritofvengeance

If you remember demon berial the conqueror of fire hell who has power fire or hellfire manipulation from devil may cry 4
          
          Can he beat ghost rider just manipulate his hellfire?
          https://youtu.be/cvjsCkxxP9E?si=tuB8bh_TV7iDrZkg

spiritofvengeance

@Penance11 what u think
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spiritofvengeance

@spiritoffear its ok well new scripting for film
            
            That aiden justice and others faces new threat that not from heaven nor hell more like a demon viruses computer long lost demon once exiled for being uncontrollable didn't die it transformed itself into a digital entity a living virus capable of rooting itself into human technology for decades it slept deep inside abandoned server forgotten code and dead network until strange data surge unlock it when virus demon awakened it doesn't attack hell or heaven instead it breaches the dimensional barrier through corrupted digital gateway and begins infecting demonic sinner souls and overlord rewriting their personality warping bodies and overriding free will both aiden and other realized this threat is unlike anything they face heaven can't stop it hell can't kill it sinner are being corrupted turning into glitching puppet like husk that obey the virus however what heaven hell did not know lucifer know who was responsible kept it as secret from them because this threat was one of their adopted child before Charlie even born
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Penance11

Oh, I thought it was a character from a source of media. I know of that one creature from Scooby Doo Cyberchaser
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Hunter528791

Plus, that’s one of my ideas while for lute being still his adoptive mother and for Charlie and vaggie planning on kidnapping him from his home in California where he lives in a mansion but I’m gonna bring out pictures of vaggie and Charlie as yandere wives

Penance11

I don’t think having Charlie and Vaggie in a polyamorous relationship with the MC as “Pretty Psychos” would be a good move. I want to write stories that keep the characters personalities intact if possible.
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Hunter528791

As you can tell, I’m very bad at storytelling so I thought maybe you might make some pretty good story chapter is based off of the beginning where Adam being killed by niffty and his son finding out about it through lute his adoptive yandere mother and her making deals with calypso to be freed if she married y/n which Calypso falls madly in love with him because since lute failed in convincing Lilith

Penance11

I found the name Arel( which is Hebrew for Lion) and I thought that would be a good name for the character.
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Penance11

Could I do it without a (y/n) insert? I looked up some Hebrew four letter names and found one that I think could be his name.
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Hunter528791

So I thought of vaggie and Charlie being yanderes who want to marry y/n out of falling madly in erotic love with him so basically I was thinking of replacing calypso with them
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