Funnycakes7
So u said u wanted feedback on ur story? Well I have some.
It's rlly rlly good and u put a lot of detail. I hope the next chapter has some pov's of Dipper in it so that we can tell if Bill is taking over or not. Overall it was a great book and I would very much appreciate it if u could put billdip in this story. If not I understand completely. Thanks so much for the great put can't wait for ch.2
Penswadizzle
I've already titled Chapters 3 & 4:
In Which Dipper Questions His Mortality
&
Mabel Needs A Hug
Penswadizzle
Actually, scratch that, I'm adding a chapter before the next one.
It'll be an entire chapter about Dipper's dream, so hopefully it'll clear some things up.
