PepperKosho6

Old: 
          	Jewel fixed her sidetails & bow as she caresses her hair with her pretty hairbrush, the shining sparkling details and hue in it left a breathtaking view as ocean played on his phone.
          	
          	New:
          	Jewel fixed her smooth side-braids & her delicate bow as 
          	she’d brush her hair while gently caressing it.
          	Bristles would run through her, lustrous & luminous 
          	hair that would give off a breathtaking view as Ocean plays on his phone.

PepperKosho6

@madnessin07 ahh thank you! I am improving very slowly but i can manage it
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PepperKosho6

Old: 
          Jewel fixed her sidetails & bow as she caresses her hair with her pretty hairbrush, the shining sparkling details and hue in it left a breathtaking view as ocean played on his phone.
          
          New:
          Jewel fixed her smooth side-braids & her delicate bow as 
          she’d brush her hair while gently caressing it.
          Bristles would run through her, lustrous & luminous 
          hair that would give off a breathtaking view as Ocean plays on his phone.

PepperKosho6

@madnessin07 ahh thank you! I am improving very slowly but i can manage it
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PepperKosho6

Yo, peepz
          
          I’m probably going to come back to this account & reboot the whole APL series entirely.
          
          Some parts of the plot will be changed, such as:
          Jewel’s backstory, character descriptions, etc.
          
          & of course, alter some of the writing & punctuation since my old writing was ..
          Questionable..
          
          Also, stay tuned followers!