A new writer, discovering his talents, im looking for construtive criticism, something i can grow from. Feel free to leave comments pointing out my weaknesses and strengths. Part of bieng a good writer is learning how to use constructive criticism to your advantage.
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- JoinedJanuary 19, 2011
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Stories by PerSonalxAppeaL
- 2 Published Stories

Parker's Life
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Parker is your typical street dog. In this first person narrative, Parker is going to walk you through his ev...