PeterUchiha

Continuing from my post, I forgot to mention to also give me feedback I don't mind the criticism it's better so I can improve. Thanks.

PeterUchiha

I'm thinking of making my first story longer with more dialogue and more story plot and characters. I also want to write a trilogy for this story  and I pretty much have the main story plots for the trilogy. These will hopefully be my projects for the coming year of 2016, and I hope to get more reads.