PetraScarlet

ALRIGHT GUYS IMMA BOUT TO DO SOMETHIN BIG. I promise I've been writing, only a little bit of untold secrets tho but the next chappie is on it's way. BUT IM POSTING THE ONESHOT BOOK I PROMISED. any and all requests are taken, unless I say otherwise. Happy reading ;)

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aratclimbs

oh boy do i have some notes on untold secrets. first one was the blm comment, really felt the need to announce ‘i don’t think police brutality against minorities is that much of an issue!’ honey, your white privilege is showing. now the fetishization. i’m not talking about whatever you put in your smut. i’m talking about fetishization of lesbians?? like do i need to say it? it’s an issue how mlm and wlw relationships are fetishized. don’t contribute to it. i get its a wattpad story so it’s not going to be accurate but my god. if you were just in a traumatic shooting where you almost died i don’t think you’d want to be railed after it?? also the whole ‘were shipping the homewrecker off to boarding school!’ they’re siblings, they can’t do that bc who would take her? granted you could be like their orphans but they’d have to have a legal guardian bc until the oldest is 18 or older and deemed fit to be by court than there’s no way. also way to publicly announce it?? it was so unnecessary and demeaning. like couldn’t there be a point where she changes or just gives up? there’s so many better solutions. now the will. at the time natsu couldn’t have been 18, meaning it’ll be stored away or even under someone’s else care until he was the legal age and some funds will go to his guardian to help take care of him. also if you’re getting legitimate death threats i don’t think it would be from a guy who you rejected the other day? i mean maybe but he wouldn’t shoot up a school bc oh no you hurt his feelings. there is so much more and some includes: hey toxic masculinity, instead of running away if he was abusive or using call the cops, the mafia, onto that how unnecessary the mafia part was, why is there fetishizing pregnant woman, teenagers with no idea of respect, teenagers who don’t know how to act at school, etc.

PetraScarlet

ALRIGHT GUYS IMMA BOUT TO DO SOMETHIN BIG. I promise I've been writing, only a little bit of untold secrets tho but the next chappie is on it's way. BUT IM POSTING THE ONESHOT BOOK I PROMISED. any and all requests are taken, unless I say otherwise. Happy reading ;)

-_Blues_Clues_-

Unless u say otherwise? Gurl  XD
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PetraScarlet

So like, I'm finna edit blood sweat and tears, and it's basically gonna be a whole knew story k? K. Also I started my oneshot book AND a calming the chaos book. If you dont know what CTC is, its basically where natsu was raised by acnologia instead. The original author of it is LyonsGirl on FF.net, but I wanted to make my own version of it so XP
           k bai.