PhantomAlorNass

Hello everyone. Patrick here. I just want to inform you that my current story, Ratchet & Clank: The Iron Devil, will no longer get any updates. I simply burn out for it. Still, this story will get another version soon, so if you want to read it, then be patience.
          	
          	See ya later, kiddos.

PhantomAlorNass

@AlphaLynroc I mean, I can make something similar to this. Don't feel bad, that this story will not get those. I may use them in another version.
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AlphaLynroc

@TheIndifference You could've had Ratchet get stuck in Dreadzone after he saved Ragna, having dropped there by Mr. I Like Purple(Cyan), because The Man in the Wall just wanted to cause some carnage, as well as watch the interaction between Ratchet and Rivet because, as far as I know about Warframe(0%) he has access to different dimensions, and probably saw the one where Rift Apart took place. Interested in how their relationship would turn out in different circumstances, he threw him where she got stuck at-Dreadzone.
          	  
          	  Wait, why am I giving ideas? The story is literally dropped.
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PhantomAlorNass

@AlphaLynroc 
          	  
          	  1: The mysterious guy, who give Ratchet Phenmor and rescue him from Jack and Drifter, was Kaden. Yes, his body was hijacked by evil version of Albrecht Entrati and therefore killed, but thanks to Conceptual Embodiment, Kaden was "recreated" by The Void. He learn what happened and wanted to get revenge for him and his son.
          	  
          	  2: Ratchet was a creature created by The Man in The Wall, who combined three DNA. Kaden's son, a Warframe and Tenno from different universe, making his own Void Demon. So Basically Ratchet wasn't Kaden son, but only had a part of his DNA.
          	  
          	  3:Kaden's son, named Ragna Rook, was imprisioned in Duviri Island, a realm within the Void. Kaden learn about it and wanted to rescue his son by using Ratchet, whom he firstly saw as a tool, but then start treating like another son.
          	  
          	  4: Ratchet and Rivet were suppose to meet during a Dreadzone. Didn't had idea how Ratchet would get there, but Rivet would be kidnapped, because I wanted to make Vox work for Lombax Empire.
          	  
          	  5: Jack was suppose to be a leader of his own faction called Cult of The Whisper and be a very serious threat.
          	  
          	  6: The Man in The Wall was suppose to be a antagonist too, but also an Ally from time to time for Ratchet. (He didn't want Jack to conquer all multiverse and took out his fun, which is messing with mortals).
          	  
          	  7:Later in story Rivet was suppose to become infected by a same virus, that is Ratchet made of. She would then become an Gunslinger.
          	  
          	  8: Ratchet was suppose to be an evolving hunter, who kill creatue like him and eat their hearts to get their powers, like dragon's breath or Werewolf's claws.
          	  
          	  9:There was suppose to be a few Albrecht Entrati. One that is fighting against the Man in The Wal, another who help Lombax Empire, and a last one who is helping Cult of The Whisper.
          	  
          	  That most important stuff. Some of it may appear in the new version, but it's very slightly %.
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Esneiberstekler

Hello, how are you? Merry Christmas!
          
          You are already doing the job I asked you to do.

PhantomAlorNass

@ Esneiberstekler  Merry Christmas. And no, I did not watch it or make a Christmas special. My team decided to reawake our old project and now I need to focus on that. Besides I saw a few scenes of this Madness Combat and it didn't peek my interest.
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Esneiberstekler

How's it going.
          
          
          Have you seen the Madness combat series?

PhantomAlorNass

@Esneiberstekler sadly no. Because of Christmas, we had a lot of work and I didn't had energy to sit down and watch anything. Heck, even tomorrow I'm going to work, even if normally we would have a free day.
            
            Being adult sucks sometimes...
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Esneiberstekler

By the way, have you already seen Drago Ball Z, Daima, Super?

PhantomAlorNass

@ RichardThang2002  never saw one either. I stopped using wattpad and reading R&C stories, because I couldn't find anything interesting for me.
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RichardThang2002

@PhantomAlorNass Then do you notice something about the connection between Ratchet and Clank with Star Wars? I read some of the fanfic about R&C and Star Wars, but it seems that they didn’t continue the story.
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PhantomAlorNass

@ Esneiberstekler  nope
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Esneiberstekler

By the way, what is your favorite anime? Do you like to watch anime?

Esneiberstekler

Halo has comics and books within its PREQUEL or sequel
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PhantomAlorNass

It's interesting, but I don't think I can pull that one out. While yes I played games, I didn't read books and comics, making my knowledge about Halo Universe lacking.
            
            If I want to write a crossover story I need to have a decent knowledge about each IP, that's why my previous story had more chapters and elements, but the problem was that they confuse, mix and overall cause chaos in story lore.
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Esneiberstekler

@PhantomAlorNass What do you think?
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Esneiberstekler

By the way, what do you think about the Madness Combat series? Did it make you curious about something or did you just want to understand the franchise?

PhantomAlorNass

@ Esneiberstekler  I have it waiting on my tabs to watch. I want to have whole weekend to see it and analyse it.
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Esneiberstekler

I'll give you a review so you understand it. 
          
          
          
          https://youtu.be/u7OS_bHxCvI?si=-9YTpSnqHsVy2ZlN

Esneiberstekler

I'm glad you understand, there is no comment that has helped you correct your mistake, I'm not good at giving ideas and in the story But I can support you in what is in your story and Correct what you are doing in your hole.
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PhantomAlorNass

@ Esneiberstekler  you bring good points here and that's why I will change my approach to how this one will be written. Like notes, codex and that all chapters will be released after this whole thing will be written, checked by my beta reader, checked and corrected by me and again checked by beta. It will take time, but I'm in no rush.
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Esneiberstekler

@PhantomAlorNass Look, if you want to make a good story you have to focus on your development, like imsoniac does with his characters and ideas, etc.
            
            A good introduction, without a plot hole, focus on some characters and their development, respecting the rules of your story, analyze your story well in your project so as not to make a mistake
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Esneiberstekler

Have you ever played gta san andreas Imagine if I put a Ratchet mod

PhantomAlorNass

@Esneiberstekler  by the way, would you be so kind and read, in your free time, a chapter titled " The End" on Black Knight? I put there an ideas that I wanted to use in this and previous book, and I would love to know someone's opinion. The list is kinda long so it may take some time to read it.
            
            You don't have to do this if ya don't want to.
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Esneiberstekler

@PhantomAlorNass I was just saying that GTA is very playable and there are some modders for GTA Mods.
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Esneiberstekler

The truth is I don't have it, I had it 8 years ago with my play 2 of my GTA SA but it got damaged and I couldn't complete the game
            
            The only thing I played was GTA 3, it's a good game I reviewed everything.
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