PhantomAlorNass

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I recently got an idea for a Titanfall x Apex Legends story.
          	
          	Kuben Blisk was sitting in a bar, reminiscing about an old days, back when Frontier War was. He had his team, his Apex Predators. And every single one of them fall against a Militia Pilot, a man that become a legends in Frontiers.
          	
          	Jack Cooper.
          	
          	Blisk remember his fella. He impressed him. Despite many things against him, Cooper managed to not only kill his team, but also harm IMC very much. And that's why Kuben give him his card, to show this Pilot that he got a spark in him.
          	
          	Now people forget about Pilots, Titans. A Legends in their own times. Nobody talk about them, nobody remember them. Now every one only see new Legends, Apex Legends. Individuals with amazing skills, powers and backgrounds. Some can travel through reality, others are literally a killing machines.
          	
          	But they aren't Pilots.
          	
          	And now they would need them, more then ever. The Syndicate is planning something, something that may danger Outlands. Don't get him wrong, Blisk know that he ain't saint. He have a blood on his hands, even innocent one. The old Blisk was cruel, ruthless and would kill anyone that is against him. But now he is older. Have a family, a daughter that he trained in Pilots ways. But he need someone else. Someone like Cooper.
          	
          	Blisk take out his communicator. Each one of his cards have a number on it. He can use them as a some sort of holographic cellphone. He dial a numer on Cooper's card and call. After few long seconds of waiting on respond, Blisk start thinking, that Cooper may not answers.
          	
          	He was partialy wrong.
          	
          	"Cooper here. What do you want, Blisk?"- asked a voice on another side.
          	
          	Kuben expected many things, like curses, telling him to fuck off or something. But he didn't expect to hear young male voice.
          	
          	"Do I speak with Jack Cooper?"- a old Mercenary ask.
          	
          	After few seconds he get his answer. And he didn't liked it at all.
          	
          	"No. Dad died few years ago of illness. Now only I'm a only Cooper related to him."

PhantomAlorNass

@ TheIndifference  Thanks and don't worry.I don't plan to write like other writers, few stories at the same time.
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AlphaLynroc

@TheIndifference I have had an idea like this before. But in mine, the kid becomes an Apex Legend. And Cooper's still alive. But I think this could be a cool idea. 
          	  
          	  But please. PLEASE just stick to one story. Writting two is just a lot of commitment
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Esneiberstekler

Hello, how are you? Merry Christmas!
          
          You are already doing the job I asked you to do.

PhantomAlorNass

@ Esneiberstekler  Merry Christmas. And no, I did not watch it or make a Christmas special. My team decided to reawake our old project and now I need to focus on that. Besides I saw a few scenes of this Madness Combat and it didn't peek my interest.
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Esneiberstekler

How's it going.
          
          
          Have you seen the Madness combat series?

PhantomAlorNass

@Esneiberstekler sadly no. Because of Christmas, we had a lot of work and I didn't had energy to sit down and watch anything. Heck, even tomorrow I'm going to work, even if normally we would have a free day.
            
            Being adult sucks sometimes...
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Esneiberstekler

By the way, what is your favorite anime? Do you like to watch anime?

Esneiberstekler

Halo has comics and books within its PREQUEL or sequel
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PhantomAlorNass

It's interesting, but I don't think I can pull that one out. While yes I played games, I didn't read books and comics, making my knowledge about Halo Universe lacking.
            
            If I want to write a crossover story I need to have a decent knowledge about each IP, that's why my previous story had more chapters and elements, but the problem was that they confuse, mix and overall cause chaos in story lore.
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Esneiberstekler

@PhantomAlorNass What do you think?
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Esneiberstekler

I'll give you a review so you understand it. 
          
          
          
          https://youtu.be/u7OS_bHxCvI?si=-9YTpSnqHsVy2ZlN

Esneiberstekler

I'm glad you understand, there is no comment that has helped you correct your mistake, I'm not good at giving ideas and in the story But I can support you in what is in your story and Correct what you are doing in your hole.
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PhantomAlorNass

@ Esneiberstekler  you bring good points here and that's why I will change my approach to how this one will be written. Like notes, codex and that all chapters will be released after this whole thing will be written, checked by my beta reader, checked and corrected by me and again checked by beta. It will take time, but I'm in no rush.
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Esneiberstekler

@PhantomAlorNass Look, if you want to make a good story you have to focus on your development, like imsoniac does with his characters and ideas, etc.
            
            A good introduction, without a plot hole, focus on some characters and their development, respecting the rules of your story, analyze your story well in your project so as not to make a mistake
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Esneiberstekler

Have you ever played gta san andreas Imagine if I put a Ratchet mod

PhantomAlorNass

@Esneiberstekler  by the way, would you be so kind and read, in your free time, a chapter titled " The End" on Black Knight? I put there an ideas that I wanted to use in this and previous book, and I would love to know someone's opinion. The list is kinda long so it may take some time to read it.
            
            You don't have to do this if ya don't want to.
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Esneiberstekler

@PhantomAlorNass I was just saying that GTA is very playable and there are some modders for GTA Mods.
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Esneiberstekler

The truth is I don't have it, I had it 8 years ago with my play 2 of my GTA SA but it got damaged and I couldn't complete the game
            
            The only thing I played was GTA 3, it's a good game I reviewed everything.
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