So I received a review on ff.net and the reviewer made some good points that I wished to address so that no one would be confused.
This is my first time writing a story and sharing it with others so in many ways I am still figuring how I write and the ways a story should flow.
I originally started this story because I had a hazy idea of what I wanted and what I thought I could do. As the reviewer said my style changed partway, the reason being that I slowly had more of an idea of what I saw for this story and was and still am experimenting with it.
I am not using the Evil Overlord List as much as I had, as I stated earlier the story took a bit of a turn than I didn't originally expecte and I will admit that I had forgotten to update the description to reflect that. I had based my original character Miasma off of figures in the Danny Phantom universe and had started with the intention of further going into him, but Miasma had another idea.
I do this as a hobby and I would love if a lot of people liked my story, but I understand that my story is different from the normal DPxYJ stories out there. I am also aware that since my story is mainly based around an OC that it is much less likely to be read, I myself have tried stories only to stop reading them because of the quality of the OCs that they have in the stories. (p.s. I've also read some where I have loved the OCs)
At this point I know that my story has evolved. Yes, evolved, I think that might be the best word for it truthfully. In the beginning I had a few loose ideas where Miasma was some random background villain who gets tired of being taken down easily and decides to change that. I've always enjoyed books where there is emotion and life in the characters and depth of detail that makes it so that you aren't just seeing the interactions between characters, but also with the surroundings. I don't know if that makes me weird, but it is who I am as a reader and that bleeds over as a writer.
