Libinator
Gosh I started reading your book. It's amazing and I love it lol
Murdle_Urdle
Hey I saw your fanfic and was wondering if you could see what you think of mine so far. If you have the time, of course.
PhantomLover1
I read through and did a couple grammatical fixes. The story is very easy to get into, but I feel like the personalities need longer time. Some of the wording is confusing in the second chapter so read through it and change them. Other than that, I love the basis and concept of your writing. Keep going!