PhantomTheDragoness
I will say this in the most sincere way. Fourth Wing sucks! It is the absolute worst thing I have ever read! I’ve been pretty quiet on social media about my dislike of Fourth Wing. Really, only my irl circle knows about my deep hatred for it. However, that will remain no more. Fourth Wing is just a mess, story and editorial wise. Now, fantasy is hard to write as there is very little to be original about anymore. But there are gaps you can exploit still, just like in any genre. Fourth Wing went the opposite direction and did nothing original. It’s a basic enemies to lovers romantasy story with nothing to offer. Fourth Wing did very little world building. Even places described in the book were in the wrong place on the map provided. A stopwatch one of the characters used, I still do not know what era its from. Any world building that was done, was blocked by the damn toxic romance between the main characters. A lot of the story was predictable, even if it didn’t follow the bland story line every romance follows. Parts that would’ve have been interesting were cut and immediately replaced with love triangle bs. I find it that bad even the main line about if a dragon dies, the rider dies as well, is as boring and unoriginal as anything else. Its just an opposite of Eragon. That line could’ve been interesting. It could have shown the harshness of battle between dragons and their enemies. Kind of like in House of the Dragon. Where if your dragon dies, the rider dies from the fall. And if they do survive, they don’t survive escaping the battle field. Instead its if the dragon dies, the rider dies as well. I hate it in Eragon and I hate it in this. And I could go on and on and on. Like how Violet is just a Mary-Sue, Xaden is as toxic as you can get, with Dain being no better. How all but one of the intimate scenes offered nothing to the story (no joke, fanfics have more of those scenes that offer more to the story). 1/2
PhantomTheDragoness
BTW, I did like some characters, but two of them died for some bs reason in the story. I did like some elements, but once again, they were overshadowed by the stupid romance drama. Yes, there are worse stories. Worse stories that are also published. But I will never understand how stories like Fourth Wing get so popular when other stories in the same genre, that are MUCH better written are ignored. 2/2
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