hi! i am a fairly new writer and would love for some feedback on my work if you could give any!

I dont write smut, the scene will just fade to black (srry!)

I appreciate feedback (constructive criticism tho. spare my mental health plz)
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Story by Phaseria
Breathe by Phaseria
Breathe
In which young teen Mari Kite finally learns to escape everything all she has to do, is close her eyes, clear...
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