Phoebe

Your English is fine. You're still learning how to use it properly, and that's good. You shouldn't stop writing English stories. The more you try, the better you get.

EVERY GIRLS WANT TO BEAUTIFUL BUT ME I DON'T WANT CAUSE I'M PERFECT...
          IF YOU WANT TO BE BEAUTIFUL BECAUSE YOU WANT TO ATTRACT THE BOYS TO YOU
          BUT ME I'M SIMPLY CAUSE I CAN ATTRACT MY REAL PRINCE CHARMING AND HE'S NOT ONLY PLAY ME HIS TRUTH LOVER...