PhoebeLee-mcbride

@SasukeLuvr Yeah maybe, but you have reads for the wrong reasons. Also learn how to spell . Oh and also writing isn't about winning , it's about expressing your love  and feelings towards a fandom (for a fanfiction anyway). This whole thing started beause you couldn't take a couple sentences of constructive critism. And also i just want to say that your story is much like 'My Immortal' which is a poorly written Harry Potter fan fiction.

MoonlightShadow5378

@SasukeLuvr Haha, your comment made me laugh so hard XD 
          
          
          Seriously, swearing is just one of the ways to prove that you have a very small vocabulary and it also makes you sound childish and VERY immature. Perhaps you should consider working on your insults for the future, just a little bit of constructive criticism ;)

PhoebeLee-mcbride

@SasukeLuvr Yeah maybe, but you have reads for the wrong reasons. Also learn how to spell . Oh and also writing isn't about winning , it's about expressing your love  and feelings towards a fandom (for a fanfiction anyway). This whole thing started beause you couldn't take a couple sentences of constructive critism. And also i just want to say that your story is much like 'My Immortal' which is a poorly written Harry Potter fan fiction.