Phoenix911

How do you put pictures on each chapter

mustard_paintballs

I read most of your story! It has a lot of potential and the idea is really good even though it is based off of a T.V. show. However, the errors cannot be ignored. You should have someone edit it or do it yourself. Then it will be awesome! Perfect, even. Make the plot a little bit slower as well! Really good story though! I would appreciate if you could check out my story and maybe return some of the things I did!