PhoenixFire24601

For anyone wondering about my "editing" of Heart of Stone (let's be honest, it's more if a rewrite at this point lol), here are my goals of things to add:
          	-A more solid basis to Mare's friendship with Bella (as well as just making Bella a better friend)
          	-Establish a friendship with Jacob before Eclipse
          	-Build friendship with Wolf Pack
          	-Establish friendship with Leah before Eclipse (I don't want their friendship to come out of nowhere)
          	-Add transitions to New Moon to show time passing rather than making it really choppy
          	-Add more internal dialogue in general 
          	-Clean up inconsistencies with Faerie Lore and how I wrote it 
          	
          	There's probably more, but I'm still working on New Moon and haven't thought that far ahewd tbh. 
          	
          	

PhoenixFire24601

For anyone wondering about my "editing" of Heart of Stone (let's be honest, it's more if a rewrite at this point lol), here are my goals of things to add:
          -A more solid basis to Mare's friendship with Bella (as well as just making Bella a better friend)
          -Establish a friendship with Jacob before Eclipse
          -Build friendship with Wolf Pack
          -Establish friendship with Leah before Eclipse (I don't want their friendship to come out of nowhere)
          -Add transitions to New Moon to show time passing rather than making it really choppy
          -Add more internal dialogue in general 
          -Clean up inconsistencies with Faerie Lore and how I wrote it 
          
          There's probably more, but I'm still working on New Moon and haven't thought that far ahewd tbh. 
          
          

PhoenixFire24601

So, I'm doing some light editing to my Doctor Who series. It's not a super thorough editing but I have some conversations I need to edit to fit small changes that have been made to my outline since I began as well as adding a few small conversations to define relationships. 

remuslupinsgrave

are you updating heavens light soon? absolutely love it!!

remuslupinsgrave

ahh saw the update!
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PhoenixFire24601

I hope to, I'm part way through writing the first half of Partners in Crime, but I'm really busy with school so I can't promise anything. Just know it's not abandoned lol
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Chloe132122

hello/good evening, I'm just sending you this message to ask if I can translate your story on Emmett (her voice) into French. I'm just waiting for an answer from you so even if it's negative, please answer me.

Chloe132122

@ Chloe132122  ok thank you very much
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PhoenixFire24601

I think I'm going to have to say no, at least for now, just because I am planning to go through it and edit it again, which may change things in the story. I am flattered though and I will let you know if I change my mind.
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mommysorry1925

Hey I don’t know if you’ll even see this but I just wanted to say that doctor who was my favourite show since I was a little kid and I’ve read a lot of fanfics for it but none of them compare to how amazing yours is I love the first book and the sequel is just as amazing, I love the part time companion dynamic it is honestly so good thank you so much for bringing me the joy of experiencing that story