PhoenixFire24601

For anyone wondering about my "editing" of Heart of Stone (let's be honest, it's more if a rewrite at this point lol), here are my goals of things to add:
          	-A more solid basis to Mare's friendship with Bella (as well as just making Bella a better friend)
          	-Establish a friendship with Jacob before Eclipse
          	-Build friendship with Wolf Pack
          	-Establish friendship with Leah before Eclipse (I don't want their friendship to come out of nowhere)
          	-Add transitions to New Moon to show time passing rather than making it really choppy
          	-Add more internal dialogue in general 
          	-Clean up inconsistencies with Faerie Lore and how I wrote it 
          	
          	There's probably more, but I'm still working on New Moon and haven't thought that far ahewd tbh. 
          	
          	

Theresz

Hii, are you still updating Hellfire ?

PhoenixFire24601

Yeah. I do chapters in like five episode chunks where I go through and put all of the dialogue into the transcript and the write the episode. I'm almost done with the dialogue portion and I should be starting to work on The Snowman tomorrow. I don't know when it will be posted, but I'm working on it. 
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PhoenixFire24601

For anyone wondering about my "editing" of Heart of Stone (let's be honest, it's more if a rewrite at this point lol), here are my goals of things to add:
          -A more solid basis to Mare's friendship with Bella (as well as just making Bella a better friend)
          -Establish a friendship with Jacob before Eclipse
          -Build friendship with Wolf Pack
          -Establish friendship with Leah before Eclipse (I don't want their friendship to come out of nowhere)
          -Add transitions to New Moon to show time passing rather than making it really choppy
          -Add more internal dialogue in general 
          -Clean up inconsistencies with Faerie Lore and how I wrote it 
          
          There's probably more, but I'm still working on New Moon and haven't thought that far ahewd tbh. 
          
          

remuslupinsgrave

are you updating heavens light soon? absolutely love it!!

PhoenixFire24601

I hope to, I'm part way through writing the first half of Partners in Crime, but I'm really busy with school so I can't promise anything. Just know it's not abandoned lol
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Chloe132122

hello/good evening, I'm just sending you this message to ask if I can translate your story on Emmett (her voice) into French. I'm just waiting for an answer from you so even if it's negative, please answer me.

Chloe132122

@ Chloe132122  ok thank you very much
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PhoenixFire24601

I think I'm going to have to say no, at least for now, just because I am planning to go through it and edit it again, which may change things in the story. I am flattered though and I will let you know if I change my mind.
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