For anyone wondering about my "editing" of Heart of Stone (let's be honest, it's more if a rewrite at this point lol), here are my goals of things to add:
-A more solid basis to Mare's friendship with Bella (as well as just making Bella a better friend)
-Establish a friendship with Jacob before Eclipse
-Build friendship with Wolf Pack
-Establish friendship with Leah before Eclipse (I don't want their friendship to come out of nowhere)
-Add transitions to New Moon to show time passing rather than making it really choppy
-Add more internal dialogue in general
-Clean up inconsistencies with Faerie Lore and how I wrote it
There's probably more, but I'm still working on New Moon and haven't thought that far ahewd tbh.