Oh wow is that profile desc. old.... So sorry you had to read that!
Your book is quite good, but I'm not so used to Thai (I hope I got that right) long names. That makes it a bit difficult for me to read, and I'm pretty fluent in Japanese. Maybe it's just the sick I've got right now that hurts my ability to think better, but I'll be coming back to your book later when I can. It's a good plot so far, not one that many books use. Good job on it!