Phoenix Sky Rivera

So, I just finished writing chapter 3 of Bloodlines. It is 12 pages long and yet I still feel it is lacking a bit. Of course, the story is still in need of editing. I am waiting until it is fully complete to go into heavy editing. I have learned it is easier to just get the story down first and worry about editing later. It is less stressful and pressure. 
          
          I have so many plans for this story and can not wait to get it all written down. These characters are basically my children. I love them deeply and hope you will love them too! I also hope you take away some important lessons incorporated in the story and I look forward to seeing if any of you resonate with any of the characters. 
          
          Now on to Chapter 4 which I should have ready by this Sunday! If you have been following the story, please be sure to leave me your thoughts down below. Which character do you like the most and why? Do you have any predictions on what is going to happen next? What do you like about the story so far? Feedback and impressions always help me out, not to mention they keep me highly motivated to keep writing!
          

Finally finishing up some revisions. Took way longer than expected with some unexpected personal stuff happening. But it looks like I'm going to have some new chapters up this week. Super excited and glad to be back on track officially.

I took a break from writing to focus on other stuff, but I'm back at it again. Reading and working on my book with fresh eyes has made it a lot easier for me. Doing some rewrites, and fixing some plot holes in my storyline. It's hard but also very fun and I can't wait to see the end result.

Edited some typos I missed in Encounters. Now I'm revising chapter three before I publish it. I hope to have it up by the end of the day!

Chapter 2 of The Uncontrollable: Bloodlines has been revised and republished. 

Revisions have been made to The Uncontrollable: Bloodlines. You can read the new version of the prologue now. More updates coming soon!

The Uncontrollable: Bloodlines is undergoing some editing so bear with me and I’ll have it republished along with some new chapters very soon. 

Book One of The Uncontrollable series has been re-titled from Packs to Bloodlines and has a new cover. Let me know what you think.

Today I’m focusing on finishing up the next chapter of Shades: The New Race. I’m also working on completing the next chapter of The Uncontrollable: Packs. 

If you’re enjoying The Uncontrollable: Packs please vote for each chapter and comment on each chapter with your thoughts. What did you like about it? What did you hate about it? Who’s your favorite character so far and why? Your feedback is much appreciated!