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@Parmonal i forgot to mention. Delirious is one hell of a risk taker(surprise surprise) which I assume you already know , and its because of that he has a thing with reading "Chances" so he can get either insanely lucky, because of that he often gets a sort of 'high' and unneccessary arrogance that isn't inherently bad but more often than not it clouds his judgement. And frequently, Delirious will often go on a roll just being unbelievably lucky or just good in skill, but if there's anything that can trip him up when he's on a roll, all that momentum will come crashing down on him, I remember Vanoss pointing it out in a "Dude I'm not Scared" Video, he said that Delirious will be act all arrogant and say things like "YEAH WHATS UP?! HUH? WHATS UP?!" to suddenly be begging in the next moment, saying "PLEASE! PLEEEAAAASE!!!! I'M SORRY" XD. The Perfect Superstar for the Master Cameraman indeed lol

@Parmonal Amelia Watson is a master at identifying and puzzling things together, and she still has combat skills that are acceptable enough to pass, Delirious is also has enough smarts and even better instincts that make him viable to get started at detective work or puzzles, but where he really shines is his combat ability and leeway to be able to take a fall where Amelia Watson wouldn't because y'know... healing factor. Its just a Really good execution of the "Brains and Brawns" Amelia can find the way forward while Delirious will make the means to go forwards. This can be a very good method for Delirious to be able to be introduced to the new world in a way that is familiar to him while helping the plot advance forward with Amelia Watson. 
            
            What do you think? it doesn't have to be 1 to 1, i understand if you have different plans to the characters but really, i wouldn't mind at all, because if you just got even a little bit of inspiration and reference to help build my Favorite Youtuber of All time, then it would enough...
            
            
            
            Also this guy LOVES Dragon Ball. a Kemehameha is REQUIRED!
            
            Again, if you have different plans then, that's fine by me, i don't mind at all...Except for the Kamehameha, THAT is required...

@Parmonal Delirious is also more likely to choose flight over fight if a situation is deemed too difficult to confront.
            
            Which is why again, my respect to you for giving Delirious his "Aura of Flowing Water" ability, it requires good eyes like a Sharingan, and makes delirious have a great balance for his nature of both powering through a problem and his likely hood to choose flight over fight, since the ability allows him to advance but also wait for the right chance to strike...but personally... i think this is too OP for a starter ability and although it is an excellent choice, it would be best of the ability is later recieved in the middle part of the story where Delirious will have to learn to polish his skills and somehow deal with his reckless natures, in the mean time i suggest to just simply give Delirious a sharingan, "Eyes of the Flowing water" its an ability that i can only be active for a short period of seconds in high stress situations like a fight and will basically be like a sharingan, but in low stress situation, it will help Delirious figure out puzzles by spotting cues and can be used for a prolonged time, think of it more of an ability that points Delirious towards the right direction, like hints, this will help with his tunnel vision, so that he wouldn't use up his resources on the wrong things. Delirious is a powering through type, all he really needs is to be pointed towards the right direction for him to be likely to succeed.
            
            And all of this, is very complementary to Amelia Watson. (Assuming that she is still without Magic or rather lacking in Brawns)
            
            Delirious loves Horror games, and horror games have a lot of puzzles and mysteries, both things are tied to Detective work. And Ironically, both are primarily solo work, and even so, neither if them don't neccesarily need to have great team work for the partnership to work, both people doesn't neccesarily need each other to do what they do, but would help each other tremendously if they did,

Ok

@PowerPistol1111 I will probably only be able to continue it next year, as I am focused on certain stories at the moment. I will return to it as soon as I can.

Okay, I understand.

@nanohaprime You aren't wrong. Though when I get the chance to continue with the drafts for the future chapters, I will eventually get to what happened.

Yes, that makes sense. But wouldn't that mean that another CPU survived besides Seraphina? I mean, yes, three thousand years have passed since that event, but as far as I know, CPUs are goddesses and shouldn't be able to age, or am I wrong? Or... does Salem have something to do with her disappearances?

@MatthiasWrites Understandably, I will post updates of my chapter releases at times if the notification system is a bit busted

@PhoenixTMC I don't think I checked this out yet... Maybe I'll spend some time reading through to the latest chapter and send what I think. But please know, I'm not that great of a judge when it comes to words.