Phoenix_Dreams_

Sooooo im writing a book on my main acc and guess what-
          	
          	i finished the prologue.
          	yeeeeeeeeeee i rewrote it like 5-6 times
          	andd
          	
          	
          	its not publisjed yet-
          	oops;-;

Phoenix_Dreams_

@meher___ THATS SO SWEET OF YOU i'll do my best in writing it ;-;
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meher___

@Phoenix_Dreams_  can't wait to read it!
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Phoenix_Dreams_

Sooooo im writing a book on my main acc and guess what-
          
          i finished the prologue.
          yeeeeeeeeeee i rewrote it like 5-6 times
          andd
          
          
          its not publisjed yet-
          oops;-;

Phoenix_Dreams_

@meher___ THATS SO SWEET OF YOU i'll do my best in writing it ;-;
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meher___

@Phoenix_Dreams_  can't wait to read it!
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naishasfineprint

updated new chp check it out and pls vote n comment<33
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1205943682?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=crazyyfictions&wp_originator=tqQBqV3hJUGwNrcilo0mCh6KHZS%2BZSd%2BnVgpBY8FMs9r1K6p88b2DSw6bd2M6krck07%2BOWfY99IhXoxYGHcXJfGkFpC%2BRAgdVPndQyhtN0wpZgnomHCZ5kr

Phoenix_Dreams_

@crazyyfictions looking forward to see the updated version!
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naishasfineprint

@Phoenix_Dreams_ okay tysm for the feedback i ll try improving the prologue but the chapters r rushed cuz ppl usually tend to get bored by reading long chapters but i ll look into it:)
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Phoenix_Dreams_

@crazyyfictions It feels like a flow is not there. It doesn't make me feel emotions and the writing is quite a bit rushed. In th car accident scene, writing more about his feeling when the accident happened should improve the writing. Some scenes are cringey for me, but I literally cringe at most things, so I'm not sure whether its your fault. Its probably cause the badboy plot is so overused that I'm tired of reading it anymore. I think tahts a short summary. ♡︎
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