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@Marleene17 thank you!

@PicassoWithLaPen Never disappointed when you update .

@tyoung67 thank you! 

I thank you for telling us what happened with O. I hope he gets his life together but it still seems like he’s up to no good.
            
            I was so ready to fight if that was his baby. I was so unsure I was like I don’t think it’s his but you never know I was definitely on edge LOL first I thought it was gonna be the pregnant teacher baby 
            
            All their parents get on my nerves.
            
            I love this story and I hope they continue to grow and love each other correctly. A vacation by themselves would be great 

@TCLXX_ thank you!  get some rest and I can’t wait for the feedback! 

I loved it. I stayed up to 3am to read it. I will give you a more detailed comment later in the day I need some sleep LOL

@TCLXX_ yes we will

We will be here when you are ready 

Thanks

@tyoung67 that’s a really interesting perspective and I think it’s very common for daughters to experience with their moms. Hopefully, you’ll enjoy Part 2. I won’t give up anything yet, but I think this part will be interesting compared to Part 1. 
            
            Thank you for reading the story!!

@TCLXX_ I greatly appreciate the feedback! I can admit while I try to keep it realistic it can be hard at times not to leave anyone out. It’s so many kids and side characters I try to include everybody lol. But you’ll see more of the friends in later chapters. Also, Ari’s mom in my opinion has always been judgmental since day one, especially when it’s about Ermias. Her behavior will be discussed later on. 
            
            I really appreciate you reading the story! I can’t wait to read your comments about Part 2!

1. Yes it slowed them down but that’s what children do to you. So I enjoy the realistic perspective 
            
            2.I am a stay at home mom so I’m partial lol but I definitely understand her wanting to work for a peace of mind.
            
            3. I don’t like her momma at all what happened to her why she so judgmental now
            
            4.its nice they have a larger family it can be hard to deal with without a village helping though 
            
            5. I just wonder what happend to his friend that was in jail. Maybe a way for Ermias and Lauren to have some time to themselves not to forget about their relationship. I enjoy your writing how you do it 

I loved both books enjoyed them from start to finish.  I like Ari and Ermias as a couple.  Never thought about them apart from each other.  Would love to see how Ari and his sister can develop a better relationship.  Want to see them as new parents and marriage hopefully.

I liked rose she seemed interesting. I liked when they linked back up after he got out of jail 
            
            2 No I’m not a writer lol I let y’all have your creative freedom 
            
            3. I’m team them together 
            
            4.His friend gets his name cleared. His sister getting in their good graces. 

@PicassoWithLaPen please release Ohagi from prison.

Very excited 

I can’t wait

I was not ready!

That can’t be the end please stop playing with me 

Thank you can’t wait 

I can’t wait for the update!

I love would a second book. I love your writing 

I would love a second book too. This one is goood and to have his POV is cool 

I would looove a book 2 cuz I don’t want it to end lol 

Thank you!

Legacy by @writersbyken
            Found a way by @breezyxeast 
            The preachers son by @ALLYD0LL 
            These 3 are gooood.