PicnicOnTheRoadside

Hey everyone — quick heads up! I’m going back through the early chapters of DFM for some rewrites.
          	I realized Arkady’s direction and the worldbuilding could be clearer, and I want the early chapters to hit as hard as the later ones.
          	I’ll be adding depth, tightening the pacing, and expanding some character moments.
          	Thanks for sticking with me — updates soon!

PicnicOnTheRoadside

Hey everyone — quick heads up! I’m going back through the early chapters of DFM for some rewrites.
          I realized Arkady’s direction and the worldbuilding could be clearer, and I want the early chapters to hit as hard as the later ones.
          I’ll be adding depth, tightening the pacing, and expanding some character moments.
          Thanks for sticking with me — updates soon!

SojgoAlt

What happened to Loose Ends?

PicnicOnTheRoadside

Highkey, I didn’t like how the story was going. I felt like the concept was pretty cookie-cutter, I wanna make something unique, not something you can read from a thousand different writers on here. I’m more focused on Dirge for Mankind right now, which is pretty similar conceptually (conflict with anthros, Eastern European, etc.). I might come back to Loose Ends, but I’m mainly working on Dirge for Mankind and a novel which I plan to actually publish.
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PlayerIncarnate

@PicnicOnTheRoadside
          
          Hey Man! Is Loose End's going to get continued one day? It's been awhile since the last chapter.

PicnicOnTheRoadside

@Blueshadesguy Btw feel free to check out some of my other stuff, can't guarantee that they're not bunz but until I figure out what I wanna do with Loose Ends, they're decent alternatives
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PicnicOnTheRoadside

@Blueshadesguy If I can get myself to take a break from STALKER 2, then yeah probs
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