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Hi I am an aspiring writer and it is a big help to me if you will try to read my story All I Ask. I'm also open for suggestions. Heto ang link if gusto mo siyang basahin https://my.w.tt/SNSwnAeAtT
          
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Pag nagsulat ba ako? May magbabasa? Isa lang akong hamak na hampaslupang nagpupumilit na maging manunulat.