lizzieswine

Hey I did see ur comment on my book I wanted to mention that you are right. I’ve thought about that and how I never built the story, and I never created a plan for it. I just write. I never thought it would get as many reads as it has now, and I am working on fixing it. I’m not offended because I’ve noticed these things myself. I never kept track on my book and never really spell checked either, that’s my mistake and I’m working on a new book that I’m putting more thought into and I’m actually writing a plan.
          
          I do appreciate your honesty <3

lizzieswine

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I made this book when I was being a little horny fuck so that’s really my only reason on why they had sex in the first two chapters
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lizzieswine

 I agree I was very impatient with the first 2 chapters I never knew I would go further than that if I’m being honest-. Lizzie in this book is 25 she is not 33 as mentioned in the description, but it was definitely not my intention to make Lizzie look like a molester.. I’ll change that when I can but I’m at work atm. But I won’t forget
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PikaaboooOo

@lizzieswine trust me this book has lot of potential after u fixed it. But it's better if u put something to give purpose to lizzie lusting or attracted toward y/n or she will jst be a sexual molester trapping young students.
            U can put revenge plot, childhood memory or lizzie saw or y/n helped lizzie in some situation but never saw lizzie face or lizzie fell for her in love at frst site as u mentioned that y/n is very beautiful or sexy as everyone in college taking her picture and lizzie mistake love for lust.
            
            The sexual tension in frst two chapters were good but it was very short and fast. U jst need to fix and she book gonna be one of my fav. ♥
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