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I would like to thank all of you for giving me 150 followers. I couldn't of done it without any one of you.

DoggoParadise

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Um...............  (sees the your story)
          Oh hell no!!!!!  (then I read and it's good)
          Fuck yeah!!!!! (then it's a disgusting ship)
          Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!! (but it turns out cool)
          ???: THIS IS DISGUSTING 
          ME: NO
          ???: IT'S DUSGUSTING
          ME: I SAID NO
          ???: THEN HOW YOU GONNA PROVE IT
          ME: IT TUEN OUT COOL I LIKE IT EVEN              THE WRITER ONLY HAS PUBLISHED																			ONE STORY
          
          SECOND LATER.....
          
          KEEP YOU'RE GOOD WORK!!! 

dekumomo4life

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dekumomo4life

@TransformersGoRULZ I think you got the wrong dekumomo 
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TransformersGoRULZ

@dekumomo4life yeah same for me btw can you update the my hero my villain story
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BBK113

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Sorry man it's because you're a talented author.Shared trauma,I read it in public and I looked like a crazy person.That story was rlly fucked up. Where did you get the idea for it.And do you have some tips on writing?

PineappleFlavored

@BBK113 Also put ? At the end of a question.
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PineappleFlavored

@BBK113 but what do I know. I am just some kid that just transferred to AP English.
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@BBK113 Well, I shouldn't be one to give tips. I focus mainly on readability. Just follow what your 3rd grade teacher said. Make new paragraphs when dealing with new ideas. Put spaces after periods. Don't be afraid to share a personal opinion. When speaking as an author, bold it. If what you're trying to say is too long, put a comment in. That's what I do, at least. Try to make your writing relatable to your target audience.
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