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arch two is definitely going to be longer than arch one. I also have to figure out where I want to go with the story in arch two.

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i finished ark one of wings, should I upload it all at once?

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i posted them all anyways
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its 11 chapter total ive posted  up till 7 right?
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I was so tired, I was so tired of it all. Of all the fighting, of all the negativity, of all the washed up dreams thrown down and all the promises to return broken.
          
          I tried to speak but my voice was so sore from all the yelling, my mind was so washed up from all the thinking, and my body was so tired with all the battling, yet all I could muster was a single sentence in a sob.
          
          “I- Why is this so frustrating, Dain?”
          
          Dain pulled me close. Into his embrace he hugged me tight, I was so exhausted from fighting. My every muscle aches, finally getting their chance to rest and taking it in its entirety. I felt myself melt into him practically becoming boneless in his hug as my whole body relaxed, the lack of sleep started to seep in.
          
          “It is not your fault… Do not blame yourself for the faults of others.” Dain only rubbed his hair back, the relaxing motion further driving Aeolus to sleep. 
          
          Dain stayed like that for a moment, making sure Aeolus was asleep before picking him up bridal style, being careful of his wings, Dain made sure to position Aeolus in the most comfortable position before making his stand to leave the battlefield. 
          
          The land filled with charred black ground and rivers of red splattered everywhere, golden blood falling from those of mighty places. The air thick with gray smog and the horizon a golden red fanning out into the marron sky.
          
          Blood dripped down from his figure, but he could care less as they were only minor wounds. His main concern was his love, Who had fought bravely without anyone close enough to help in time.
          
          	They needed their rest, the both of them.
          
          pt.2

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dude its still too long so two parts I guess
          He carefully cupped my face, I felt his calloused thumbs carrese my tears away. His callouses scraped gently in comforting patterns.
          
          “Sometimes it's difficult for even me to understand what I have become, but for you? I’m willing to become anything… even a monster…” Dain’s voice was but a gentle whisper, close to the wind, oh so close, it seemed to blow away with the wind. 
          
          His fierce eyes looked deeply into me. Leaning forward he placed his forehead on mine, I watched as he closed his eyes before opening them. His gaze had softened, “Finding you was hard… Loving you- Loving you was not Aeolus.” A hiccup escaped me as I had started sobbing again, Dain’s breath was hot on my skin, The sweat on my forehead slipping down my face.
          	“Even if you do not remember, Even if I do not remember, I swear to you- Listen to me my love- I swear to love you no matter what you become. You are safe. You are strong. And you are loved, Aeolus”
          
          pt1.

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i dont think i spelt Carrese right... hahahah
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This is some world info about the regions of Aureus Terra, the planet "Wings" takes place on. I will be posting mroe but for now here is one reagion. (just the main land) 
          
          The Riana kingdom (main land) is a desert biome. It is home to most reptile shifters and the goddess of fire as well as the God of lightning. It’s people sport bright emerald green eyes, and black hair. Their overall figure is built and tall, standing at least a foot higher than the average height for both bio genders.
            The Riana Kingdom is most known for their powerful, top tier lightning attribute weapons and armor.(This coming from the spirit beasts with the innate ability to control lightning in some form.) And for their genius war strategies, They are also known to believe in the Goddess of Fire: Agni, receiving a blessing from her lets the person(if the are within the 77 million) control fire mana.
             It is said that the people from the Riana Kingdom are so beautiful and eye-catching that it even shames the shimmering purple moon. The most beautiful thing seen from Aureus Terra

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this is just an overview i will go over in more detail when it comes up in the novel
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I just noticed that the setting for wings is confusing, so I just wanted to say that it is a modern fantasy.
          
           The story includes Gods, Shifters, the concept of time, space, creation, erosion, and destruction. it is a fantasy genre in a modern setting.

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I will be posting a chapter explaining the world, the regions and showing the map of the world "Wings"
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