BubbleVanity

hi, would you mind checking out my story. Maybe critic it a bit and suggest ways to improve it? I'd really appreciate it if you do. It's about a young rich boy who fights his attraction towards a bratty mean girl.
          Also, you could suggest some of your stories to me in exchange.
          thanks!!https://my.w.tt/UiNb/r8UaSTpRsI

BubbleVanity

@BubbleVanity 1 already finished and it was . 3 and 4 currently in my lib. the rest I'll surely read. hahaha.
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PizzaMarie123

@BubbleVanity Umm...sure
            And I suggest you read:
            1. It all started with an apple
            2. Three and a half legs
            3. Library Love @kpgcatlover
            4. Not exactly Romeo and Juliet @kpgcatlover
            5. The Loner Girl
            
            And I can't remember any more
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