@Mermaidpancakes2 it’s a rly good story, dude! What I have learned is, not against you or anyone else’s, critiquing mine, that if you don’t like how one scene is worded, or if it sounds weird, just skip it and come back to it, or rephrase the start of it. Like if it said - *i spun around and accidentally spilled my drink* “Why’d you just spin around and spill your drink on me?” - I’d just put *I spun around a little quickly, not realizing I spilled my drink until the person next to me said something.* just a little tip for if you have a scenario like that. So sorry for not getting back sooner, I’m in 8th grade and in advanced math which brings like, 5 assignments for homework a day, so I’ve been occupied since the start of the school year. But, uh, rly great plot, story, I love the way you describe the scenes. And for publicity, I honestly have no idea. Sometimes I come on and it says 22 views, then I come on a few days later and it says 50, so I honestly dunno. Rly wish I could help with it tho. I also feel rly awkward writing this cuz I have like, rly bad social anxiety when I’m not around people I know so, sorry if it doesn’t make much sense. Hope I helped a bit??
