Alyssa

Please read "It's complicated" by kpohani

Hello :) 
          I saw you had written a steam punk novel and I wondered if you perhaps review my book, "Training"
          
          Once you've read enough to make a review, please write it in @Renesmeewolfe 's "Promote your stories here" 
          
          I'll post the link.

@EricaStanciu Thanks so much for fanning me :) Yeah, me too haha

errr...not hate. I meant I had the heat on.

I saw your story in my little recommended books thing and thought it sounded cool. Once fanning you I realized you're from Las Vegas! Me too. I hate the heat on. I'm such a baby lol.

@poisonedperspective Thank so much  :) 

Your welcome for fanning ^.^ I hope you can write more and update soon, i enjoy reading your stories

So officially, OoTG is done (as in, it's completed on the Word document, just have to keep uploading). However, I do want to go back and edit it. Heavily. Like, change up a lot of what's there. So one of these days when I'm up to it, I'll be redoing the entire story! Hope you guys, when it's done, will like it :D
          

@cutesushi24 Thank you :D Yeah, one of these days when I get some time, I'm going back to fix the story

Hello! =)
          I was reading Order of Gears and I think it's amazing. But with a bit of editing/tweaking/work it could be MORE amazing! Writing gets better with practice and by learning from your mistakes, so all I can say is PRACTICE! Good luck with all your stories =)