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@HalfmetalAlchemist yeah, I know what you mean.
          	
          	Sorry for the late reply, I've been really busy...

Play4God

@Lclaire They may have said they were too long becase you put them together the first time...
          
          But I think they are an appropriat length, though technically it doesn't matter the length as long as it isn't too wordy and or too vauge, and you get the main idea of the chapter across

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