yardhound
Thanks for voting on my story I hope you enjoyed it. :)
anyanwu15
And in three days I'll continue with arashi's journey
anyanwu15
And tell me if I'm doing something wrong
anyanwu15
Hi ploopy, I need to ask what do you think of my book. Please tell me your views.
Ploopy_III
@anyanwu15 Okay, the storytelling and character descriptions are very good, and the detailing of the gruesome scenes is also very good. Honestly, you should be proud of yourself. It's just that I only read fanfiction of things I've already seen/read, so it might not be for me. Maybe it's just me, but I can't stop thinking that the story is like Demon Slayer but in the future. But again, the story is good, just not for me.
anyanwu15
Tell me your views on it
anyanwu15
@Ploopy_III hi, have you read it
anyanwu15
Hi ploopy_lll. Please help me read my original book. If you like demon slayer. Here's the link.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/395382045?utm_source=android&utm_medium=com.openai.chatgpt&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=anyanwu15
anyanwu15
Hey. What do you like about the chapter
Ploopy_III
@anyanwu15 Oh, I must have forgotten about that. Oops. But do be sure that you are taking care of yourself, too. No pressure.
anyanwu15
It's all nezuko. So as you know, in my note. I said I would make nezuko actually talk. She would say her views on being a demon and they play ball together before they got attacked by lower four, susamaru and yahaba
Ploopy_III
@anyanwu15 I like it because of the way that you handled Arashi's PTSD and didn't just throw it out the window in the following chapter. Tho I do wonder how you're gonna get him to go with Tanjiro and Nezuko.
anyanwu15
Hey
Ploopy_III
@anyanwu15 I like that you are taking it at a good pace with the backstory and character-building. The story concept also seems interesting, so good job.