Vhini Sarmiento

Hi I'm aspiring poet, can I have feedbacks about my works of poems? Hope you can check it out! 

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3 

The Eating Maniac
          Maniac 01: When It All Started
          
          "This is the f'cking reality if you don't believe." - Mark Parker
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1083719681?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=PlumaNiSimoun&wp_originator=NH66HXHTA33u2Pv0BE6pw13GUz4ERlUn5Q%2BNmzZh%2Fd0yqMuR2CwhMTArN1VSXkfzG9q6iqDoiTfydMKQD6XsdKHrLv66cpsu1B8HQ9K%2FpS7df7ljKitvfh4te8uqXdBU
          

I'm back with my stories.
          
          The Eating Maniac
          Prologue...
          
          "12 seconds is the average rate of a person infected by the virus to stay on his proper mind after bitten by the zombies."
          
          Yiieh! Inspired by 5 centimeters per second.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1083719669?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=PlumaNiSimoun&wp_originator=YT%2FZzAwxoA7q%2Bw20ggj6Ca1YT2NfWPTEBw0fDU2roT3KAQgoHqQAkB8aGUcnxHo29x5lCSbVDVX55Czzepl3EaAJI6XmgEP1IIFC3DkN7GmcUYvf%2BPc9e8PQVSl%2F4QPx

Updated:
          
          Chapter 2 of Tears from the Night Sky
          
          And also this new story, chapter 1
          Less Than 143...
          
          

“Do you think tears fall from the night sky?”
          -Flee
          
          Tears From The Night Sky
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1031222884?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=PlumaNiSimoun&wp_originator=G2eunK1Bf1%2BN34qY80LnrVugmq3JOhBns6k3tIXUmb8ciFhYdmZNOQDpegFrSxsP6rFQD4qzbqQZuYDWpNiPbQSs6Z2UMuimSCsriJJoPsr60y%2BhHv1yNIbVAl9CtwR1

ClASS MAYHEM'S
          
          I post the Prologue of the novel...
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/258163893?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=PlumaNiSimoun&wp_originator=Nwa0IrVFYL85ur6H17xcwsY45A78ElsxfC6uLZ0qj8f4ZFMcL63xAZAYlDDzalfXwUR2kkxb1RXbVGNIFF3XVIZJgrX4Tz64%2BR%2FAkVPqaYnY5OtoP%2FdbkRqBoFdE7JhV

New story alert!!!
          
          Class Mayhem 
          written by PlumaNiSimoun
          
          Soon...
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1023688487?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=PlumaNiSimoun&wp_originator=AUSVGDa%2Fq%2FEDRl%2Fi09%2F%2BPC%2Br0xyK8J1N84Bf8Nl9ypaXViOXlonoCI%2By07HdGfpHwBX4F6yi47eRQl4sHnHxoo5fGrofcO2ptFgpoKlFgTHhbGpNO2Zp2vLd7KqIT5GF

The EATING MANIAC
          
          CHAPTER UPDATED!!!
          
          Chapter 5.2: Saved His Ass
          
          Will you save your friend?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1023531103?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=PlumaNiSimoun&wp_originator=0efF12TyRfFCRbZzJYki%2BSQUfqEBiBFvOIti4aYkUCgZDOix1DcDv41FkADyEp0ZZdLLYC8D34qVtz8rj1Yt97vSz8YXfHAIBeNwZN5G1hctyEXc2oy4hi3blLeq2iH0

The Eating Maniacs 
          Chapter 5: The Traitor
          
          Who's that traitor?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1020123475?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=PlumaNiSimoun&wp_originator=SRfEGhOib47bXKMKdZXoVascGX7tV2rkC%2B4e2%2B2kbbBDr6BlcZbztw6RntIo2a8ROdhkMvMnOnWok2TXn4LVf6g7KCSVP%2BnaXLYGosqj%2F35w5TCVj3RUfwmkhXy7ush6