LuciferDaredevil2
Would you review my book for once
moonIitroses
Hello! Of you could please give my book a try, I would apprecuate it! It deals with social injustices and good v. evil all while revolving around fantasy and adventure! If you sound interest, if would be so kind! If not, that's okay too! Have a good day and sorry for taking your time! :)
https://my.w.tt/DVfMM2RR7L
anupamarc
Hey there! Thank you so much for adding my book to your reading list and the lovely voting storm. It's really nice of you to take time to vote.
I hope you are enjoying the story and if you have any feedback to give, feel free to say :)
anupamarc
@PlungingFromDarkness I am embarrassed to read that I have still left the third person in places. Thanks for letting me know. I will take a look again and I do intend to rewrite a lot of it so all the third person will hopefully disappear. Appreciate your feedback. I am so glad you like the story concept. You won't find these mistakes in books 2 and 3 because I wrote them in the correct tense :)
PlungingFromDarkness
@anupamarc Hey! Haha no problem! I really liked the plot of your book and I'm pretty excited to read the sequels. Just one suggestion tho: Can you work on re-editing your work? There were a couple of areas where you hadn't changed it from third person to first person and I got a bit confused. Other than that, great work. :)
Luthien08
Thanks for reading An Unexpected Serving! I hope you liked it :)
PlungingFromDarkness
@Luthien08 Hi! Actually I had read it long back but yes, I loved it! Good work! :)
theangelacuin
Hello! If u have free time, pls do read my story Just So You Know. Salamat in advance!
theangelacuin
@PlungingFromDarkness it is written in filipino and a little english. I'll post the chapter 1 within this week. Thanks! :)
PlungingFromDarkness
@MsWhoIsThatGirl Hi, yes I will. Which language are some of the words tho? I'm having a little difficulty understanding a few things.