Plushy69

Hello everyone, over the past week or so I've noticed a bit of discourse surronding the latest Ash in Horizons chapter. It looked like a tame disagreement within a single comment thread but now it seems to be ramping up into a full argument. So I would like to say a few things:
          	
          	Please try to be respectful to all your fellow commenters, everyone enjoys the fics to some degree even if there's diferent aspects people like or dislike. I'm flattered by all the support and feedback from those who only want my stories to  get better, but it should never come at the cost of demeaning other people's perspectives.
          	
          	I didn't realize Roy had won against Ash before, I forgot I had Kilowattrel and Rowlet battle in a previous chapter. So that was my mistake, that being said, I still think having Roy win against Ash in the latest chapter was a better narrative choice in regards to Roy's development.
          	
          	I'd like to make it clear that I will not be going back and editing previous chapters after they've been published, with the exception of the remasters. (Which only apply to chapters 1-70 btw).  Especially not to change the story, even if I regret making a narrative decision. Not even grammar errors because I post both here and on AO3.
          	
          	I didn't want Ash to be a Mary Sue, which is why I made him lose battles more than people would've liked. It was my way of humanizing him. That being said, I still think Ash wins a majority of the battles he faces within the fic.
          	
          	I really hope we can learn something from all this, I really didn't want to cause conflict or talk back to fans of my stories, but I don't think it's right to insult others just because they agree/disagree with my story decisions. I also don't think it's right to just ask the author to change their story just because you may not like how the events played out. Since at the end of the day it's their creative vision.

syedabirhassan2023

@Plushy69 thank you so much. And can you reply me on the other comment I gave.
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Plushy69

@syedabirhassan2023 I wouldn’t say you did anything wrong. You were just open that you didn’t like a story decision. I only really stepped in cause it seemed like the other two were genuinely arguing. If anything you were the most innocent one. I do appreciate your apology though.
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syedabirhassan2023

@Plushy69 I'm sorry as well I was the one who started this mess. It's my fault . And I truly apologise. It just that I didn't notice that Ash retired Anime. And it just hurted me. I am so sorry.
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syedabirhassan2023

And I kinda have some requests in the end when Spinal has been defeated can you make Giovanni and Ash have a final battle. A ultimate battle Kinda like Bayblade metal fury final episode like Gingka Vs Ryoga. (Sorry for mentioning Bayblade here.) Oh, and also If the RVT have a ceremony going on can all Ash companions be there. And also the ones that didn't appear here. ( Like Misty, May, Max, Dawn, Serena and the Alola Gang ) and if Liko's Great great Grandfather Lucious makes an appearance and meets the RVTs and Liko. Can you make thay Sir Aaron the Aura Guardian also makes an appearance. Because Ash has Aura similar to Sir Aaron.
          Please make it if you want to. You don't have to make if you don't.

Jman0611

@Plushy69
          
          What if for this  episode and the final battle with the explorers you can have ash use his ash Greninja and his new mega lucario z for the battle really show what he has got.
          
          
          
          It would  be pretty cool seeing ash Greninja team up with friede’s mega starmie, ult’s mega sabeleye, and Roy’s mega lucario z.
          
          Not to mention you can probably have ash have his Greninja use that giant orange water shuriken like in the kalos league during the final final battle which is starting in next weeks episode.

Jman0611

I was maybe even thinking ash could see that spinel’s members do  love their Pokémon because they didn’t use stromg spheres but rather mega evolution.
            
            
            Also what if after the battle ash goes off ahead to join Liko and her team since friede tells ash they might need ash. You can have ash use his charizard to catch up and stuff since it would be another valuable Pokémon to use in the fight
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Jman0611

@Plushy69
          
          
          Can ash’s lucario learn aura storm from smash bros series . Like due to ash and his lucario getting stronger due to the new mega form they develop a new move that’s special to them with it being aura storm
          
          
          Also will team rocket stay as the villain after spinel is defeated especially since Giovanni is using them

Plushy69

Hello everyone, over the past week or so I've noticed a bit of discourse surronding the latest Ash in Horizons chapter. It looked like a tame disagreement within a single comment thread but now it seems to be ramping up into a full argument. So I would like to say a few things:
          
          Please try to be respectful to all your fellow commenters, everyone enjoys the fics to some degree even if there's diferent aspects people like or dislike. I'm flattered by all the support and feedback from those who only want my stories to  get better, but it should never come at the cost of demeaning other people's perspectives.
          
          I didn't realize Roy had won against Ash before, I forgot I had Kilowattrel and Rowlet battle in a previous chapter. So that was my mistake, that being said, I still think having Roy win against Ash in the latest chapter was a better narrative choice in regards to Roy's development.
          
          I'd like to make it clear that I will not be going back and editing previous chapters after they've been published, with the exception of the remasters. (Which only apply to chapters 1-70 btw).  Especially not to change the story, even if I regret making a narrative decision. Not even grammar errors because I post both here and on AO3.
          
          I didn't want Ash to be a Mary Sue, which is why I made him lose battles more than people would've liked. It was my way of humanizing him. That being said, I still think Ash wins a majority of the battles he faces within the fic.
          
          I really hope we can learn something from all this, I really didn't want to cause conflict or talk back to fans of my stories, but I don't think it's right to insult others just because they agree/disagree with my story decisions. I also don't think it's right to just ask the author to change their story just because you may not like how the events played out. Since at the end of the day it's their creative vision.

syedabirhassan2023

@Plushy69 thank you so much. And can you reply me on the other comment I gave.
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Plushy69

@syedabirhassan2023 I wouldn’t say you did anything wrong. You were just open that you didn’t like a story decision. I only really stepped in cause it seemed like the other two were genuinely arguing. If anything you were the most innocent one. I do appreciate your apology though.
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syedabirhassan2023

@Plushy69 I'm sorry as well I was the one who started this mess. It's my fault . And I truly apologise. It just that I didn't notice that Ash retired Anime. And it just hurted me. I am so sorry.
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Jman0611

Maybe instead of ash losing you can have him and lucario pass out like he did against wulfric when he lost 
          
          Basically the mental stress with not being aligned with lucario caused a backlash and causes him to pass out mid battle after the failure to mega evolve lucario into the z mega form

Jman0611

@syedabirhassan2023 
            
            I said before it wouldn’t be a loss but rather an incomplete because he passes out. Like he is battling against master Mayoneis and he passes out like how did in xyz
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syedabirhassan2023

@Jman0611 in any battle he is the champion and he should be strong than the RVTs
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Jman0611

@Plushy69
          
          
          I really really hope you do this because I think it would be awesome. 
          
          So the next chapter it seems like Roy is getting a lucarionite-z
          
          Instead of Roy getting it can you have ash get it. Roy just got the rayquaza so  I think it would be cool if ash gets something new now.
          
          
          Like you can maybe have ash battle mustard for it since he might want to face ash in battle after seeing his matches with him over the past year.
          
          You can even have ash and his lucario sense it instantly 
          
          Or maybe you can do ash vs Roy to see who gets it with ash winning in the end since ash and his lucario are much stronger and have a stronger bond then Roy and his and proves it in battle.

Jman0611

In the end I can say please and hope you choose to do it
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Jman0611

@Plushy69
          
          I think what you did in the recent chapter of horizons is fine just don’t forget that ash is a better battler and smarter battler so he should be taking charge a lot whne it comes to battles they do together 
          
          
          Also I think it would be fine if ash still take some battles or wins from characters like Roy, Liko and ult. Like don’t be afraid to still change things.
          
          Like if Roy battles spinel in the show or someone I don’t think it would be bad if ash takes the battle against spinel instead of Roy. Sorta like how you did it when it came to the the first nemona battle post timeskip