TarantulaRex

Omg finally someone reading my story 

TarantulaRex

Thanks for the feed back it helps a lot 
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Pluss_

@TarantulaRex your story.. yeah.. about that.. please consider using fewer words like "ya" instead of "yes", "nah" instead of "no" etc. It really makes the story sound weird. Also just be reading the first chapter, there are 7 words "like" and most of them aren't even needed. Also, half the conversations are really immature... Sorry if I said too much, just trying to help you and the other readers out
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