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Hello, 
          This is Shiney here.  I have written my collective of thoughts as a short piece named "Scribblings".  It's very short and sweet.  It might take a minute to read it. Give it a try,  if you like it kindly vote it, and share your views as a comment! 
          Hoping for your love and support! 
          
          Regards, 
          Shiney
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/353325484?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_originator=vy70ufh1AXyoHOAldf1JyP1e0d4yec8qXGLfeRK5x4N10Tmri%2BpkcNZ7BRj0cgdzChX3329apFb%2BfrLfvypS%2BvGaPXjaK8nqumFOm9YjZrpH%2FlD2xFVW721IoaQUhxvQ

Hi! sorry for posting this out of the blue. so uh, I need a helping hand for my friend’s first ever published poem. I hope you guys will check it out, it would be a great help for us. Thank you in advance :).
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/269609581?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Ginsugizurasuma&wp_originator=7JNIbjFqImtM2n0FAlFzfXIVa5CndcHvvGYWX0B79rdiAcWUJ9s9kyk0qwoUkh6lUsdmTI8paxK%2BjlcmzoTXlvrBx8DyC%2BU%2BpNNcfs2LRzmP2IT7eF%2FE6x23FENT4jyR

Hi! Do you like reading poems to pass time? If yes, check out my poetry. I'm open to comments too ^_^
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/234550891-spit-rhymes
          
          Have a nice day!

You deserve appreciation
          Oh! my umbilical connect.
          Nine months journey was not easy,
          obstacles came on your way,
          but your passion and compassion made me to say.
          
          No one can be compared to you,
          and none could be like you.
          Oh! my umbilical connect,
          you deserve my appreciation.
          
          When the journey showed sign to end,
          oh! my umbilical connect.
          You did not block me to bend,
          but you allowed me to descend.
          
          Who could do this?
          It's only you my umbilical connect.
          
          At toddler, you loved me.
          At baby, you shaped me,
          and when I grew up,you trained me.
          Oh! my umbilical connect,
          you ought to be praise.
                        Written By:Isaac Mensah 
                                                  Science 2
            Edinaman Senior High School
          mensike0097@gmail.com 

Hey would you mind checking out my poetry book WORDS OF AN IDLE MIND on wattpad? Thanks!

You could
          
          Check out
          
          Some of
          
          My poems
          
          [or not]

awesome cant wait to read

I'm not really sure how this works but umm if you could check out my poetry book unheard voices that would be awesome :)

Hi! I see you like poems... Well maybe you'd like mine? I mean, you dont have to, but I really would appreciate constructive criticism if you had the time... Pretty please with a poem on top? ;)