Poggering

K Spidergirl story should be fixed, let me know if not.
          	
          	They really didn't like the funny image

Yuuss7777

@Poggering  if it was fixed
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Bios_Lacrimosa

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Ok, I got a question for ya, and it's about the plot for the Steven Universe story I'm making. To be brief I have two ideas for the end of season 1 when Lapis fuses with Jasper. And need help choosing an idea to stick with so I don't just make two entire plots just to throw one away. I plan on asking the same question to a few other writers that have written a Steven Universe story the same question to get multiple opinions. So here's the plots:
          1: Lapis fuses with Jasper but for a different reason than in canon (the outcome would be slightly different but not to far from canon.
          2: Fuck canon Lapis doesn't fuse with Jasper and either throws her away or traps her under the ocean refusing to reveal her location until she loses control and jasper escapes.(Like I said, fuck canon because this would change a LOT of things)

Bios_Lacrimosa

@Poggering Maybe, I really don't know, and yeah, I prefer it when the sex scenes are actually important to the plot. Granted for ecchi stuff like dxd then its kinda expected for smut to be around any corner. But either way, I didn't see anything wrong with the last chapter. Maybe they were talking about how big y/n got? With the picture you showed he could easily belly flop all or half of berk from the first movie. And I've already posted the first two chapters of the SU book awhile ago, I've been spending time mostly planning the plot, which I now have an official direction for, and hopefully I'll have the next chapter out soon. Though it's not really going to be actually interacting with an episode yet, just finishing up the guy moving in and also trying out a nee writing style. Anyways I hope you enjoy! 
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
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            The guy isn't going to be fusing with shards until he first experiments show up, and poor Steven's gonna be hearing it... sadly it's not anywhere near I started.
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Bios_Lacrimosa

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@Poggering I think... they're upset with the sex scenes? I, really don't fucking know , maybe try asking what they mean by that. As for actual biology and lore of MH games, I have no clue because the stuff I know is from putting a video of it on in the background. But to me it seems fine. Maybe the "full fan fiction" bit is their way of saying its unrealistic sex or something? Because granted, with the size of the big guy and trying to get into toothless... either toothless is made of rubber or big guys just got a microdick for his size, like I said, I have no clue, could just be a rando who thinks he's a know-it-all and just goes around judging peoples stories.
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Poggering

@Bios_Lacrimosa anyway thanks for the input, can't wait for your Steven Universe book to come out
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