Poison_Princess

Do you ever look around at the big crowds of people around you and realize everyone has a story and memories and family and troubles and achievements and a first kiss and a broken heart but you’ll never know any of it and every human life is really intricate and expansive but oh they've walked into a shop and you’ll never see them again and you’ll never know just what they were thinking...

mazeanukette

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Poison_Princess

Is okay, you deserve it! :P I am actually addicted to it right now! <3 Anyway I have thought of having Ysa as Emma Watson and have Chace Crawford as one of your male character! :') 
            
            *I am not a crazy fan of him, is just that I can see him in the story that's all*
            
            You have a few spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes that could be fixed up easily. :') 
            
            Hopefully you will upload your next chapter soon because I really look forward to it! :D
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Poison_Princess

Do you ever look around at the big crowds of people around you and realize everyone has a story and memories and family and troubles and achievements and a first kiss and a broken heart but you’ll never know any of it and every human life is really intricate and expansive but oh they've walked into a shop and you’ll never see them again and you’ll never know just what they were thinking...