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Hey I just posted the beginnings of a new story that I would like some feedback on. If people seem to like it then I will be continuing on with it if not then I will take it down. So please send some feedback on your opinions but be warned that this is a dark fic.

Okay so this will probably suck cause the pieces haven't been fitted together and I forgot like half of it. But when I was younger I had two main fantasy imagination stories. 
          
          One was where six siblings that were royalty and the children of this like dark mistress that had like affairs? with multiple different races of supernatural creatures. And one day the two youngest children who were twins were playing around by a water fall and the two twins fell and they got transported to another dimension and when the other siblings went to look them they two got taken to different dimensions except for the oldest brother. The dark mistress in a state of madness about her missing  cursed the land. And now years later the older brother is trying to find his siblings.
          
          The second one was about experiments that escaped a lab and they were constantly on the run try to find a safe haven while dealing with thing constantly after them and being watched. And all sorts of stuff. ( Now that it's actually being typed I probably got that idea because of my  childhood obsession with Maximum Ride. )
          
          Anyway if you like one of those ideas tell me and I'll actually put one if not both of my childhood ADHD induced imagination dream worlds into play. Or you can just laugh at how hyper induced my brain was to come up with something like that.

Okay question! Did I start something with The Avengers Mate is A Street Rat? Because before that I never saw any story even close to it now I'm seeing tons of them. And it kinda freaking me out a bit.

Check out the chapter of my fanfic that I wrote. I’m still editing it so feel free to leave comments on what I should improve on. I don’t know how to post the link because I’m new to Wattpad but you can find it on my profile. Just click here @10RedFunny

Ok guys I know I don't ever tend to finish my work when it comes to books but in falling nostalgic. So! I'm going back and fixing/rewriting one of my oldest books that I deleted because I got annoyed with it mocking me! And fix it. No even though alot of you like it it's not the Voltron family au. It my seven deadly sins book ( no connection to the anime AT ALL! ). Just putting this out here.

@Pokegirl26 do you mind updating Allister’s mother because I liked how the story was going and am curious about Allister’s roots.
          
          I have some ideas if you have writer’s block.
          
          What if...
          
          Allister has a gym battle at night past his bedtime and his mother cheers him on.
          
          Teresa takes Allister home for the night after the Prologue and her Pokémon help him get ready for bed.
          
          Allister disappears in the evening to explore some ruins with his Gengar. 
          
          Allister goes over to Beas house during a storm to watch a scary movie. 
          
          Allister’s challenged by his mother for the Ghost Badge.
          
          Allister befriends the mythical Pokémon Darkrai when it fails to give him nightmares.
          
          Need anything else just reply to me.

Can you update Allister’s Mother because I kind of liked that one and I want to see how it will play out. You don’t have too if you don’t want to. I completely understand.

Thanks for adding my book Superiority to your readinglist @PokeGirl26

I just posted a new Lost Boy's fanfic. I'm really proud of it. I got to over a 1000 words for the prologue, but I will only continue if people like it cause it stressed me a little.

Can I please have the book I have some good ideas for it