@LizMurphy665 I won't judge at all, after all I wrote it c: but I got sick of writing the death scenes. It's hard to believe, but the goriness and blood just was kind of boring after a while. Same descriptive words, and the story was repetitive in itself. Death, confusion, death, confusion. If you want, I could write another, but it wouldn't have the same death scenes. Sorry, but I got sick of writing it. But yeah, as I said, I could write another one with more storyline. So what do you think?